Reviews for A Battle of Wills
Darkarus chapter 59 . 8/9
This has to be one of the best Mass Effect Crossovers there is I hope you can come back to it someday.
clown2107 chapter 58 . 6/19
I know a couple of years have passed and I hope that one day you will be encouraged to continue this story.

What intrigues me the most in this story is, when the Alliance is going to discover the remains of EXALT are still infiltrated in its territory?
VampireDraken chapter 59 . 5/26
Found this story randomly and I have been enjoying every chapter so far. The characters are well done and the twistes were well placed. I am currently looking forward to the next chapter that you post. I can’t wait to see what happens next.
Dragon master 124 chapter 23 . 3/18
I love the Star Trek References! Thank you since I have always felt that Mass Effect was influenced heavily by Star Trek.
HelioBM chapter 5 . 12/22/2019
Female Shepard again :-(
Guest chapter 4 . 12/5/2019
Dy
chiroho chapter 59 . 10/16/2019
First off, thanks so much for writing such a great story. Even though you haven't had the opportunity to update recently, I know how much effort you put into the story to get it to this point. I've very much liked the takes that you've had on adapting a post X-COM universe into Mass Effect, and the way that the humans have reacted to other species in a way that was different than the ME game.

I've also really liked your action scenes, because I know that you take an extra effort to make sure that they work well. The way that you work them into scenes with more back and forth dialogue between the characters works well - even when I'm struggling a bit to follow one of your more "unknown location" scenes.

So thank you very much. I do look forward to seeing how you finish the story, whenever that may be.

Oh, and Phoenix Point? Great game. I've been playing through Backer Build 5 and there is a lot to it. Definitely addicting in the way that the original UFO:Enemy Unknown was way back when I first played it on the PC Gamer Demo Disc in 1994. But obviously greatly updated in many ways, and with I guess a Lovecraftian element thrown in for the enemy. So yes, definitely psyched for the gold release when it comes out later this year.
Deafhood1998 chapter 10 . 10/13/2019
that line Wrex said "Were it so easy".
Halo, Sangheili Arbiter Thel Vadam.
Guest chapter 5 . 9/5/2019
Pirates suck.
FanBoy01 chapter 3 . 9/5/2019
What are the Predators?
FanBoy01 chapter 2 . 9/5/2019
Laser weapons are cool.
Guest chapter 17 . 4/26/2019
Yeah this is edgelord trash sorry but its just too much wank and pseudo science followed with engaging in the stupidity of melee combat when ranged weaponry exists
Seanbob chapter 16 . 4/26/2019
I kind of like the concept of the story but the human characters are stupidly overpowered and constantly fight hand to hand like use a damn rifle already and stop screwing around showing off.
Guest chapter 10 . 4/15/2019
I saw that halo 3 reference, nice work
Dutchsoldier chapter 38 . 3/20/2019
I noticed in chapter 37 that you described the Alliance as overpowered and the Citadel Council as a third world power. Thing is the Citadel Council is in comparison with pretty much all other sci-fi universes a third world power if you use canon ME.
The strongest weapons they have on their only 'superdreadnought' is some 40 kilotons with armour that can't even handle a single shot of equal power to their main gun and shields that can't handle a dozen of the same power shots.
Old UNSC frigates that were already outdated before the human-covenant war even began and that are mainly used as orbital support of ground troops because they are crushed in seconds in space combat have a main gun of 69 kiloton power and armour to handle dozens of those same shots, though no shields.
The average HALO cruiser has a 500 kiloton main gun, and armour to handle half a dozen of those shots if you manage to hit them all in roughly the same place, dozens of those shots if you don't. And the things can continue fighting on even after 80% of the ship is destroyed.
So no thr alliance isn't overpowered the Citadel and ME are just current tech for the most part with the name 'Eezo' thrown on everything. The only things more advanced/special are their FTL tech, biotics and shields. Even population wise they are shit. Their total population including the canon systems alliance at 2183 is below 100 billion people.
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