Lol this was cute. Thanks!

I’m curious how this will end... is she of the moon in this story?

Ouuu what a tease ending :( But it does let the imagination wander. Sweet, short and lovely. Keep up the good work.

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i know you said no epilogue but just telling you that with a story this amazing, you could easily continue. You've set yourself up rather well! :)

Congrats on the great fic!

loved this story

Oh just lovely. I've read this before ages ago, i just didn't know where, now i've found it again! Yay!

Terrific! )

It's ok, but a prince making out with a woman he barely knows the day after he met her. I think it's a bit too fast, but I think it'll get better too. I'm going to keep reading so put out a new chapter soo.

It's more improper than harmful...

Looks nice so far with only a few grammatical or spacing errors. I haven't read all of it yet, so hopefully the story continues to keep me entertained. A bit of the archery stuff irks me. It would hurt his bow, not a heck of a lot, to sling it over his shoulder. I'm assuming by "sling" you mean how everyone sees Robin Hood, etc. do it in pictures with a shoulder in between the limbs and the string. The rest of my complaints are really personal opinions, so they are not very constructive. I hope you keep writing!

I think this was a super story! But why so short? It's so suspenseful! Anyway, love it! :) ;)

hey this is sweet! but i'm wanting more! just curious, why do you double space?

You really left me hanging! I really liked the story, but I wished it had continued.

Hawaiian-Plumeria

loved it, it was so sweet and i love seeing her beat endy in the archery contest. i know you put no epi but please, pretty please with sugar on top? puppy dog eyes and a mamo-chan of your own?