What a cute story:):):) I didn't see the name for the boy coming, a great choice;) it's good to see Hiashi caring this much for Tenten and the kid. And Hinata cutting off the Elders' babbling! Of course the idea of NejiTen having a baby good:D of course. I'm happy that everyone was there for Tenten when she needed it. Funny how boys were clueless till the end:p Thanks for sharing!

Beautiful fanfic. Honestly, TenTenxNeji is such a tragic ship. It's sad that they couldn't even attempt a hookup like Asuma and Kurenai did before the retrospective deaths of the male partners. The ending where it talks about Neji having always watched them is bittersweet, but the true sadness in how almost all the original Naruto kids died, and at the end Tenten and Neji are going to hang out with their dear friends in the afterlife...Kishimoto, such wasted potential. :(

That's was a sweet story

I cried

A very enjoyable story indeed. It was nice Neji was able to leave something precious behind for Tenten. xxHana-ChiXx had mentioned you had inspired her story so it was too tempting not to give it a try.

I wrote my first fanfiction story about Neji and Tenten and only recently ventured to try AU where Neji was alive. I like what you did with your story, keeping to canon and yet diverging to a point whereby you could insert your own OC. Lots of emotion remained embedded in story and to go full circle with a reunion was a nice touch. Thanks for sharing!

Oh god I cried a little

thats the kind of ending i want for naruto.
aww they should at least gave a back story or more exposures for neji and tenten after his death...this is a great story, a well written one...nice experience reading this.
cheers

Wow beautiful ending!

Aww I love it! I wish Neji left Tenten preggers that would've been great in the movies! I'm not over his death either and. I never will! I hope you continue to write Nejiten hopefully he will be alive in those XD! And for English not being your first language you did extremely well! A mistake I saw was when Tenten was dying and. It said Hizachi instead of Hizashi held her hand.