Reviews for The Unfortunate
fightingstoryaddiction chapter 3 . 1/20/2017
Interesting fic
Iron Dragon Maiden chapter 3 . 11/21/2016
Really liking this and I like how minor characters or characters that are only mentioned in one book but are not memorable compared to everything else are obviously not going to go to Althea's memory. It's not like she has a laptop with internet access (oh the 80's and 90's...) and that she could double-check for Harry Potter wiki for it.

I know chances are you've dropped this story for good but I like it a lot. If you find it in yourself to continue, please do!
Raiku.Nishimura chapter 3 . 1/15/2016
AMAZING!
KnightOwl247 chapter 3 . 1/9/2016
PLEASE PLEASE PPPLLLEEEEEAAAASSSSEEEEE UPDATE!
KnightOwl247 chapter 1 . 1/9/2016
If they were fraternal twins they wouldn't look identical.
FreeSpiritSeeker chapter 3 . 12/18/2015
Very cute story so far, I'd love to read more of this!
KioshiUshima chapter 3 . 11/28/2015
Guh. This is so damn cute.
greenisacolorto chapter 3 . 11/3/2015
I haven't seen many Harry Potter SI's in the HP fanfic community (and I've tried searching...) and I can probably count on one hand the number of fics that have a plot that doesn't use the genre romance as the main driving force. This is a nice breath of fresh air. I'm intrigued by what's on Althea's bucket list and how she plans on fulfilling it.
Futago no Akuma Shimai chapter 3 . 9/24/2015
My lord... I love it! This fic already has a really solid beginning... I am already excited for the next chapter... BTW I have to say that I loved (*loved*) your prologue, I thought that it was really cool how you switched back and forth between her past and new life (I even regret that she doesn't have her old family anymore, I got attached to her parents and siblings... I'm the eldest out of four girls and I can't imagine life without them, it would be boring!)...
Anyway, update soon!

Mara-Chan
Arashi - IV of VI chapter 3 . 9/2/2015
Love it!

Amazing story! :D

I like Albert. He's cool. :)
Arashi - IV of VI chapter 1 . 9/2/2015
I think you mean oldest of six, or oldest of five with two sisters and two brothers/three sisters and one brother/etc...
If she was the oldest and had three sisters and two brothers, that would make her eldest of six.
Thought you'd like to know.
northpeach chapter 3 . 8/27/2015
Ooo an original self-insert! Looking forward to seeing where this goes!
suzaan chapter 3 . 8/3/2015
Your story is good. It would be nice if she did interfere with the plot because really the plot is horrible. Serious should be freed. Molly ron and the hor ginny weasly should just go die a horrible death. And really Dumbeldore is such a douch.
Wicken25 chapter 3 . 7/27/2015
Haha it would be funny if she affected people unintentionally and did change something...is she Sirius black kid? She would magically show up on the black tree. Making her the heir.
Alena chapter 3 . 7/19/2015
!Im really glad I found your story, it is really well written and I alway the stories that include the original40 it makes them much more real.
As I said amazing story, nice character and I cant wait to see how it will develop
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