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An AMAZING story to be sure, my friend. The alternate interpretations to the characters, the plot, the writing were all factors in pulling me in right at the beginning. Though, this chapter is uneccessary. The story ended on a tragic, sad note that left the fate of the Crystal Gems up in the air, whilst continuing it and saying the won the war is stretching it quite a bit, considering how few of them there are. And everything seems to be very confusing, along with the fact you haven't updated since then, making me wonder why you did it in the first place.

All in all, great stories, there were some kinks here and there, and the ending was underwhelming after the great one beforehand. Keep up the good work, and I cannot wait for future long-term stories like this!

My gay senpai seems to hate cars after being hit by one.

Please continue this.

We thought it was done
It seems innocent for now
Please spare us, Blazey

I honestly liked the old ending. But this one's good too.

Wow. I can't even express my emotions in a review. This has been an truly incredible read. And I will most likely read over a few more times after this.

Oh my god. I cannot believe this. I CANNOT STOP READING

I was reading so intensely I forgot to review. But yeah, shit be happening

...O-O

I. Don't. Even.

Amethyst is doing bugger-all in this story, is something going to happen with her soon, or is she just a background character?

This is getting wierd, going into themes of want, and obsessiveness. I was just starting to think about Steven having to take care of so many people at once though, so it makes sense

It was too hot so they made a bonfire.

...

Logic

Oh fuck, I was laughing tears at that last section of dialogue. Amazing