Reviews for Maelstrom in DC
brachiosaurus chapter 7 . 7/19
hey, after seeing your profile, i just wanted to say: Please focus on yourself and your betterment, Kurono. This situation is taking its toll on all of us in different manner, some experienced minor, many had worse, but some even lost their lives. Perhaps yours is a major one from your life and perspective. The fact that your profile is always updated give us hope on future installments. We can wait for the updates longer, but you just have to get your life better, alrite? Your. Health. Matters. First.
monsterkillers124 chapter 7 . 7/12
Will there ever be an update to this I really am enjoying the story or is it abandoned because it's been awhile since this ever got an update to this story
Guest chapter 7 . 7/6
Update please
thegrison chapter 1 . 5/3
I went to try to read this again and another HUGE flaw a lot of people miss is the steel toe boots. Those will mess your feet up big time if you run and fight in them for than an hour. Why do you think 95% of the military does not wear them. Steel toe shoes were made to protect your feet from things in a machine shop. Areas like this - repair for vehicles, moving crates, metal tools being dropped or falling on your feet that kind of stuff NOT fighting. If you were to kick a tree while wearing steel toe boots you can end up hurting your own foot and toes due to the steel in the boots.
thegrison chapter 2 . 3/11
It is interesting but so many flaws. Naruto would NEVER kill himself. His girls would have beat him black and blue if he did and he knows it. Naruto has about 2-3 the healing rate of a normal person but that is it. The fast healing comes when his uses the 9 tails chakra. It stops healing at the fast rate when he stops using the chakra. It is a common mistake about the healing. Why do you think it took so long for heal his skin back with Sakura's heading jutsu when he went 4 tails on the Snake at the spy bridge part.
Issexwithyourcloneincest chapter 7 . 2/12
This story was acceptable at first but became disappointing to read. Wonder woman, an Amazon themiscyrian having motherly instincts for a grown man, artificial dialogue, overdramatic reactions. I honestly regret reading this
Issexwithyourcloneincest chapter 1 . 2/12
Im very sure getting rid of immortality isn't that simple. If it was, wolverine would have rather searched out lady death than allow himself to be brutalized and slowly die in 'logan'. The plot kinda seems contradictory, he wants to die, asks a god to kill him, the god does and other gods give him a new life out of pity, he wasn't reincarnated, he wasn't sent to the afterlife despite that being what he wanted but he gets his soul plucked out of his body, his body sent to another world and his soul punted back into said body. He might as well simply be directly sent to another world without the whole 'death'. That was just as bad as a battle weary Naruto who simply wants to die and meet his loved ones in the afterlife but gets sent to another to another world his consent and simply being alright with it because 'the people in this world need my help' as if they haven't been taking care of themselves before he arrived. And instead of laying low and trying to know more about everything, he joins the first group of 'good guys' he sees simply because he feels they're good guys. You can't go to a foreign country and somehow gain knowledge of everything by joining forces with a politician.
sammykordy10 chapter 1 . 1/27
Are you going to update this
Borello chapter 7 . 11/1/2019
this is really good and funny. i hoped to read more chapter.
Guest chapter 2 . 10/22/2019
Just some heads up since you seem to be more knowledgeable of the cartoons than the comics... 1) Zatanna has only been with Dick Grayson in the cartoons, in the comic continuity, she is older than even Barbara Gordon (Batgirl) and is a part of the league by the time Robin even becomes a Teen Titan, secondly she works primarily in the realm of the Occult much like John Constantine, so she does not involve herself with petty thugs, thus, she has very little interaction with any of the Bat-Family at all except for a few one-night stands with Batman when he's researching the occult. However I do agree she probably would not fit in the harem with this version of Naruto, you're depicting him as the idiot goody-good from canon, Zatana is DEFINITELY into the bad boys, she's also much more sultry than depicted in Young Justic, the best depiction would robably be Justice League Dark movie.

2) It is EXTREMELY ridiculous that Wonder Woman would have motherly instincts for Naruto, one, not only has she NOT had these instincts for her own proteges INCLUDING Donna Troy whom is essentially HER ACTUAL DAUGHTER through cloning,, but 1) Naruto is a sixteen or seventeen year old shinobi, by all means, he is a GROWN man with no need for even his actual birth mother, much less a surrogate mother, especially since you pointed out Tsunade already filled that role in the past, Naruto is now a grown man by your own descriptions. 2) It is kind of sexist to conclude Wonder Woman is going to have maternal instincts solely because she's female. For starters, the Amazons have been cut off from 'Man's World' since the incident with Hercules stealing Hippolyta's girdle, this means the Amazons have been living in isolation for at least FOUR THOUSAND YEARS, ergo that's FOUR THOUSAND YEARS of not having children other than Wonder Woman herself whom was (In New Earth continuity) made from Clay and (Prime Earth Continuity) a product of Zeus raping Hippolyta, thus they would no longer have naturally born maternal instincts, in fact this is why several Amazons splintered from Themyscira, so the idea of Wonder Woman adopting maternal instincts for a FULL GROWN MAN she doesn't even know is absolutely ridiculous, I can understand not wanting her in the harem, yes, he's a shinobi, a warrior, but he's also a LITTLE MAN compared to someone like Superman, but it could work in the case of a more grey and ruthless Naruto.
koseta.a chapter 2 . 6/11/2019
Batman would know all about the consequences of bottling emotions yet you make it sound like he doesn't know much since he deferring to Dinah in his head...
AngelKings chapter 7 . 4/11/2019
I kinda want to see how naruto end up with harly. For some reasom I find crazy pretty hot
ShadowRealmComics chapter 7 . 3/31/2019
Okay, I want to see another chapter of this story sometime in the future please. Keep it up.
Dragoncyber22 chapter 7 . 1/28/2019
A good story, and it has a very good plot. If you make a continuation or continue
the same story will be very cool and that the continuation is very makes you a great fanfic writer, and please continue the story.
Guest chapter 7 . 10/24/2018
I don’t feel sorry about the super perv, it was going to happen eventually.
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