nice chapter

story is too messt

The fact that Snape thought Harry was about to hiss made me giggle a bit.

I’m not sure if I should be concerned or not as to why the title of this chapter has a “yay” in it...?

It's Alice Longbottom not Susan

When Harry did that spell to put Dumbledore and Snape in cords...
Me: That sass tho

Argh. Sorry but that’s all I can think after reading this chapter. I can understand how abuse impacts one’s psyche but it’d be nice to read a fic where the abuse Harry experiences doesn’t make him into a pathetic illogical wimp. He had power - to the point that Hermione was even shocked and yet he still let Draco boss him around...? A simple obliviate would’ve done the trick. And he trusts Snape...really? WHY? If snape had done that to me I wouldn’t even want to talk to him. And the guilt over Malfoy - argh. Yes killing is morally wrong but in a situation where it’s to kill or be killed, the first option is a matter of survival. I don’t get why Harry is moping over Draco, who like Snape, was a total asshole to him.

Hey, cool fic. I'm newer to this sight and I'm glad one of the first fics I read was awesome. I was diagnosed with anorexia at 11 and I can really relate to Harry in this chapter. I compared myself to others constantly, whether they were thinner or bigger. Looking forward to reading more!

Yeah

This is really good.

I can't believe you killed Draco. I almost cried. Almost. Because he was an asshole. But I kinda wanted him to live anyway

Great story but it’s not Susan Longbottom it’s Alice...

Amazing!

I would NEVER forgive Snape because of the first chapter.
Unless he goes through suffering for what he did then he would NEVER be a person in my eyes. That thing is a disgusting monster.

The sequel is Lost