Reviews for Broken Pieces
shadewatcher chapter 7 . 3/24
Sqweeeee! Love love love this story concept! Can't wait to see more!
NakedGrizz chapter 7 . 2/12/2019
I assume this story is abandoned, which is a shame. If you do ever consider returning to it - I'd love to learn more about what makes Gabrielle the way she is. We hear Harry's internal monologue quite a bit, and get at least the montage version of how he changes, but Gabrielle is still a bit flat as a character. Please don't take the criticism as an indictment - I think you've started a lovely story and I would absolutely read the rest of it.
Liancher chapter 7 . 1/15/2019
It's actually very nice. Though first chapters were obviously 'inspired' by "Hope", the story moves in it's own way and I have to admit that teaching in Beauxbatons seems to fit well for this Harry. Sadly, the last update was 3,5 years ago, but I hope that it's just on hiatus and not abandoned.
Arnie1701 chapter 7 . 11/13/2018
One of the better Harry/Gabrielle stories out there. It would've been hilarious seeing the reactions of the Weasels if Ginny had gotten pregnant and the baby looked exactly like...MALFOY.
Angel Cauldwell chapter 1 . 8/22/2018
It has been three years since you last updated any of your stories. Are you not going to update any more?
Philosophize chapter 7 . 7/6/2018
This is enjoyable. I hope you come back to continue it.
katepanis1389 chapter 7 . 7/2/2018
Please update
xNaruHina chapter 7 . 1/25/2018
So much for that guy being better at defence.
xNaruHina chapter 6 . 1/25/2018
I was fine with Harry drinking, he might have enough issues to warrant finding a bit of relief in the bottom of a bottle... but full on counselling and PTSD? What even... he has had to take maybe two lives? He saw a family member die? Unless you are going with the route of him being systematically abused by the Dursleys then nothing should really warrant having PTSD. I have had my grandmother die, my little brother die, been abandoned by my biological father, bullied, etc. None of it ever gave me PTSD. Sure I had confidence and self-doubt issues for a long time and sure my brothers' death messed me up for a good year at least... but time heals all wounds except for the most serious.
xNaruHina chapter 3 . 1/25/2018
How in the world did Harry get an O in charms when he can't even cast a half decent glamour charm? He scored higher in charms than Transfiguration, when he can't do a simple charm?
AshxSelene Writer chapter 7 . 12/26/2017
I'm done now. It's clear you're never going to finish this story. Thanks for wasting the time of at least 981 (as of typing this) people who were enjoying this story. Hope you feel good you jerk.
doRodrigo chapter 7 . 11/2/2017
Loving it! Hope you update it soon enough. Keep up the great work. Cheers!
Erimenthe chapter 7 . 8/18/2017
I would love to read more of Harry teaching at Beauxbatons. I would also love to see a bit of his past reconciled (so he can see Teddy at least) as well as how things go for him and Gabrielle. Update soon please?
HarryPotterFan545 chapter 1 . 7/31/2017
Gonna have to move to the review box because PM isn't working.

I've essentially given up on hoping that your Harry/Gabrielle story is going to be finished. It's been a year and a half and no matter the reasoning for such a long wait, this is unfair to those who have enjoyed the story. Even if you're still busy working on this original book, you need to consider your fanbase of your stories more. Or at least if you aren't going to update anymore (which is what I will from here on believe until actions speak louder than words), delete the stories or post a new installment on them or on your profile saying you won't finish them. Or if you do still plan on someday updating them, remind us periodically (like every month or two) that you haven't forgotten about us. I would at least know for sure where things are going with the story so that this mother-fuhking over-a-year-long daily checking of my follows list to see if my favorite story on the site had any new action on it can fuhking stop!
seeldewgong chapter 5 . 4/11/2017
Nearly two additional weeks and still nothing...
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