Reviews for Springtime for Sarada
Guest chapter 4 . 5/5
Okay this did not make ANY sense to me so I can't debate on the matter
Guest chapter 3 . 5/5
ALSO i really love how you've incorporated Naruto's feelings for Sakura when he was younger into this and have used it as plot-ish. It WAS incredibly public, I suppose his declaration of love for her and I would imagine it wouldn't have faded away instantly and would hold SOME meaning. And I've never seen anyone call Naruto out on this in any of the post war fics, like not an inkling of mention of his feelings or just how it would change or influence anything he did.

I also like the fact that Naruto is more present of a father to Boruto and his kids, i can not imagine hisi children being so incredibly neglected even though I know his entire time woul dhave been taken as being the Hokage- i was reading another well written fic about Kakashi's time as a Hokage and it was exhuasting to say the least.

i also love how you have written Naruto an dhow you've written his feelings towards Sasuke and it's just so realistically
Guest chapter 3 . 5/5
You're the only person I've seen that twists things in ways I could never imagine things to be twisted to. And it simultaneously scares me and makes me really look forward to each chapter. But I am always so wary to click next because I am so afraid of what I'd find there. What other so out of the blue idea or plot or just- i can't explain this. But you have such a vivid imagination and such different story writing style. I can't put it into words
Illuminated chapter 6 . 4/30
I don’t get the crow part. Who created or directed them?
Illuminated chapter 5 . 4/30
i gift you with a plot: what if mitsuki was orochimaru’s son with sasuke!?
Guest chapter 5 . 4/27/2019
Hola no te interesaría hacer un fic de danganronpa makoto naegi con los poderes de nate grey
EVA-Saiyajin chapter 5 . 4/11/2019
Heh, nicely done all in all. Kushina's interactions were most amusing, and Naruto's bemused "I don't get what's up with that kid" matches a canonical moment perfectly-Boruto can be very odd.

Looking forward to the next.
EVA-Saiyajin chapter 2 . 8/30/2017
Well this is certainly rather entertaining, considering how it handles Sasuke's...Sasuke.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/27/2017
Always a treat to read your stories.

Nothing about the ending makes sense, especially when it has anything to do with Sasuke or Orochimaru. I just pretend Madara won and they're all in the Infinite Tsukiyomi. Maybe he left and went to space or something and left the world to their delusions.
Red Star chapter 2 . 8/17/2016
When you started writing about Sarada (back in Honor and Intent), I didn't really approve; mostly because she was relatively new and yet it seemed like you had already drawn conclusions about her. But since then, I've watched you take to Sarada and build interesting stories around her that shows her becoming her own person instead of being just Sasuke's daughter. I'm so glad you have, and I'm glad that there is such a talented Uchiha-skeptic writing for this fandom. Sarada deserves better than what she has gotten in the Boruto series but if that never happens at least we have you. Thanks for writing.
Blitzstrahl chapter 1 . 6/27/2016
Just keep this in mind from now on. Sasuke Uchiha is Ronald Weasely.
As in the author did what they did out of nostalgia of their original premise. Ignoring plot possibility, and fandom response.
kellyshl chapter 2 . 5/25/2016
Who is karui akimichi?
She would have put up with Karui Akimichi for Sarada's sake, anyway. But Karui had never really forgotten that Sasuke had kidnapped her sensei. And her eyes could be pretty scary when she was busy holding a grudge. Also, she was strangely a better cook than Sakura, which was incredibly annoying. She'd only married into the Akimichi, there was no way her cooking should have improved that much.
Biigoh chapter 2 . 5/24/2016
Amusing... really amusing...
For Spite chapter 1 . 8/17/2015
Rabid the rabbit. Cute. Naruto has a history of terrible puns so it fits. Not sure inserting Kaguya into the narrative like that is a good idea, but it's a comedy so it might work.

The Sakura-Sarada interaction with the threat of burnt food at the end is pretty great.

"Springtime for Hitler" isn't a real play. It's the play inside a work of fiction (a film and later musical) called the Producers about people trying to make a play that's meant to fail as part of a fraud scheme and deliberately picking an offensive title and subject. The Producers is a comedy, so they accidentally succeed because people think what they made is funny.

You're right that everyone's urge to forgive Sasuke for everything despite him basically making no attempt to make amends is insane.

"Kakashi doesn't have one for not training Naruto and Sakura during the Chuunin exam"... except that Sakura wasn't going into the finals so he wanted to focus on the people that were going to have a big test coming up and especially on the person going into the deathmatch with the insane killer. Naruto's not going into a fight with Gaara the murder-machine so Kakashi got him the most highly recommended teacher he could find while he was working with Sasuke. It's really not the dereliction of duty some people make it out to be- even if he should have arranged a teacher for Sakura as well as Naruto. And it's been repeatedly established that Kakashi doesn't have very big chakra reserves for a ninja of his level so keeping an extra two shadow clones going might have impaired his ability to get Sasuke ready to fight Gaara. He was teaching him Chidori, a move that drains a pretty large amount of his chakra going by the limited number of times he told Sasuke he could use it before exhaustion, that would be pretty hard with his chakra worse than split into three.

Jiraiya on the other hand has tons of chakra, so yeah, no excuse there. Especially as Naruto's godfather. Kakashi was in his early teens when Naruto was born and in no position to take care of him but Jiraiya really should have done more.
KitsuneShin0bi chapter 1 . 8/10/2015
Actually the idea of a madman holding Kishimoto at gunpoint isn't that far off. Interviews with Mr. Kishimoto revealed his editor(s) had him make a lot of changes to the story if he wanted to run (and keep running) it in Jump. You can see quite a lot of changes from his original concepts in these interviews; some of which he changed of his own volition, and some which the editor suggested. I would equate it more to him just giving in and trying to salvage a series he had no original intention of making.

Besides, a general rule of thumb is to not read Shonen manga for the plot. You can appreciate it if it has good story, but you shouldn't try to look too carefully. Of course, there is only so much one can take of bad plot before it gets ridiculous.
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