Reviews for The Awakening
RubinaLadybug chapter 5 . 8/21/2017
I enjoyed this story. I understand your view between the hosts for Venom. Harry bonded with Venom many times in season one. Yet Flash only did so twice before the bond became permanent. But, hey, the cartoon wasn't geared for long term stories. Some things got rushed.

Nice work for the theme of family and looking into Harry's desire for family love. Can't help but feel bad for Harry when he just wants his father to be there for him. Yet it's so difficult with a father as temperamental as Norman. At least they managed to make amends at the end of your story.

I did notice, though, how each chapter became shorter. I would've liked to have read as much detail for the finale as the beginning had started. Like, what was going through each character's mind and their reaction. I was still excited for the battle scenes. Guess it's better to finish a story than leave it hanging.

I love how you wrote Spider-man. His quips sounded like the real deal. I'm glad he was able to help out the Osborn family, even if Ock got away. My favorite part was in chapter two where Peter comforted Harry. I love genuine friendship moments.

Anyway, awesome story. Thanks for the great read!
Sturnidae chapter 3 . 2/26/2016
loved this chapter!
same chapter 1 . 12/9/2015
mlg bruh
Sturnidae chapter 2 . 9/5/2015
you have to continue!
Charlion EM chapter 2 . 7/16/2015
Poor Harry! Great chapter! I can't wait to read more!
WildImaginationsUNLEASHEAD chapter 1 . 7/13/2015
I love this, please continue :)
EmpressRulerofallthatiswierd chapter 1 . 7/12/2015
This just got interesting:):):)
Charlion EM chapter 1 . 7/12/2015
Poor Harry! I hope he goes straight to Peter's house and Aunt May mother hens him :). Betting Peter is out playing hero? Great story!
Chaos Supernova chapter 1 . 7/12/2015
Wow...if I were in Harry's place, I don't know if I could put up with Norman...I'd run away too. I agree with you, Harry should be Venom. I like the series, continue please!