Huh... Does this mean all vampires are technically under Jasmine's control? They all die to become one after all.

I really loved this book. It's the first HP/TVD crossover story that I've been completely engrossed by.

I have to say i love the story so far despite the few spelling mistakes, it isn’t unbearable like some stories.

Why does she have to get a job...

but, wizards have potions that cure colds in an instant! How else do you think Hogwarts can function without all the students getting sick!

wait, so Percy isn't an Umbridge/Fudge lapdog? I thought he wasn't cordial at all with his family after GoF! Or maybe it has been too long since I read DH combined with too much fan fiction...

Do you think the figure was Voldemort?

well done :)

I'm guessing master of death will come into play on this one? good story so far!

Ive really liked the story so far, but honestly, you kinda stretched the plot to anorexic levels with an open ended vow like that... I think that may very well have just ruined it for me. Why would an individual that pretty significantly outclasses another bind themselves to them as little more than a slave? It just really didn't seem believable or logical. I hope you smooth that plot point down, the story's been great up to this point!

LOVE IT!

I don't understand why she is still friends with Damon and Stephen. They need to convert or she needs to choose a side.

This is a very enjoyable story, but you keep switching between first and third person perspective, which is distracting. Odds are you're aware of it by now, but I've been told constructive criticism is to be encouraged

but Sirius was always serious, absolutely always

I absolutely love Damon and Jasmines friendship lol