I wonder when will you put another chapter?

There's two reasons why we wouldn't go to war over this: if we were already at war, or if they got away with it. For example Japan did this to China during WWII, and China never forgot what happened while Japan still denies. As for the second... do you know what happened to the gypsies?

I'd like to point out one thing: the raloi had omni-tools but previously you stated that they were a human invention. I'd understand if the schematics were in the prothian archive, but not if they were developed parallel to each other. We already have the Asari to thank for parallel evolution, anything more and it becomes a little past credulity.

Keep in mind that it's a small thing though. Loving the fic so far!

Heh Skunkworks... I got that reference!

Thats pretty extreme don't you think thers good four eyes as well plus only the sgb can be that brutal and crual

I know I'm only on chapter 10 and a lot of the story is already written but after the whole Eric thing I really hope they commit genocide, like other fics have a lot of batarians dying but I want one to have every single one die and I want it to be this one.

Like I know it kind of brings humans down to their level ... but they started it

Okay don't forget the dlc's man they do have extra content of the story you can incorporate.

Good story though this looks like a ripoff from Mass Effect: The First War.

he knew little about how mass relays worked. he remembered something about dark matter, but he knew even less about that.
ive read many a statement like this, and it makes you sound really stupid. yeah i can with convidence say that the second chapter is filled with words saying a whole lot of nothing

Too bad large parts of the story are stolen from another author :(.

because the big 4 have training exercises there is less orbital defence. so ofc you take a planet which in on the outside of your territory with multiple unknown connections by mass relay. and this is not a setup so that the battle of sanxi will be harder.
your first chapter was useless other then saying they found the beacon earlier. a timeline with what tech they have wouldve been much more usefull. cause as of now i only see high energy lasers, which is nice and all but not really possible with mass effect tech

Well I’m back up today I truly do love this story in a sea of stories that have been abandoned and I have seen my fair share of stores that I absolutely love that I would legitimately pay money for for somebody to finish I really appreciate that you are continuing this

I love the way you to pick to the battalions too many stories basically pretrade them as just evil and that’s just what they are but giving the reasons for why they act the way that they do really helps you understand why they are

This is my favorite chapter in this whole story up to this point

Death to the Xenos!