Good. I like it.

Overall this was a good story, but I can’t help but feel bad for Ultear because she is one of my favorite characters.

This right here is why communication is important. If she would have just told him that she backed away before they kissed then everything would have been fine.

Great story

Zeref is my brother. He must love me as he brought me back to life.

Forget Aquarius! She was just a friend to Lucy! Igneel was the only father figure and the only family I ever had!

Fuck the ER I'm going to kill Jellal! Both Erza, Wendy, and Ultear are mine! And I do love Erza and I'll make her see that I didn't reject her and I'll explain how this is so! I'll make Erza mine!

I can't promise I won't beat Jellal so bad he'll be in the ER for years. And yes Ultear can help me because I love her too.

GreAt story

This story was a typical 'misunderstanding and realizing we need to talk' setting, but it was executed excellently! I liked it.
To be perfect for me though, Natsu must have had to admit to kissing Ultear to Erza.

On another positive note though, I had looked into many many different Fairy Tail fanfictions today, but did not manage to completely read through any of them, except yours. The majority of these stories apart from yours are, to be blunt, very immature. Characters are made unrecognizable (overpowered and arrogant Natsu, lovestruck Erza or Ultear, etc.), the settings are uncreative and repetitive and they fail to incorporate any kind of believable character development (you read the words 'I love you' within the first page-why does the story have 40 chapters then!?)... Therefore, after an evening full of frustration and face-palming, I am happy to have found your story. Thank you.

A Dragon's Jealousy is a mature tale, very readable and of high standard, in my opinion.

1) What the?!

2) I can ship only Siegrain [Evil Jellal] X Ultear (of the Magic Council) and Natza (only during the Tower of Heaven Arc). I don't understand how Natsu can be shipped with Erza now. I had read the entire story (without any reaction first), and I read it the second time.

3) Did you purposely ignore the JerZa moments in the Oracion Seis arc? Yes, the moments at the end. You don't remember that Erza's last name was by Jellal (who admired her scarlet hair)... You don't remember Erza's heavy sobbing of Jellal and her.

4) Look, I can understand why you ship both (refer to the second paragraph), but at your starting point, I can just cringe. This is just my opinion, and I hope you know I respect your opinion. I can see they have a lot of potential, but literally, the anime/manga has been pointing out many (JeRza and NaLu) moments.

5) Note: It is also nice to see you contribute to the Fairy Tail Fanfiction Community (Also adding more stories to the fellow couples). I am just stating my opinion on your story.

A sweet ending! Thank you for writing this story. I'm a Natsu/Erza shipper, and I noticed on your profile that NaLu is one of the best OTP in FT series. Please! Don't give give up on NaZa! It'd make me sad. :(
NaZa forever!

Oh out of the frying pan and into the fryer. At least Natsu won in the end. Sweet Ending :)

It was a good short story. 7 chapters is just the right amount.

I have often wondered what Natsu would do if a girl just straight kissed him. Kinda wanted a bad girl to do it in the series once, just for his reaction. Erza definitely would be a girl to take matters into her own hands. Realistically Ultear is dominant enough to do it too.

Just have to say love the ship tease starting with the comfort chapter was amazing. And this triangle/square things with Natsu/Erza/Jellal/Ultear is pretty interesting. All it needs is Gratear/Graza drama to complete the hexagon.

I'm not a big Naza fan but this is actually pretty sweet so far. The Ultear/Natsu stuff is new to me and a bit OOC (but always thought the potential was there for it)

Genial fgh