Ah man, this was such a wonderful read! I really like it and it definitely doesn't miss out on their usual banter. Nice work and thank you for sharing!

Nicely written

Nicely done. Very in-character. The cooties part was really funny and very, very Danny.

Brilliant, I loved every second and you did a marvelous job of showing the bond between Steve and Danny, coupled with Danny's understandable terror that he might well lose Steve to something as mundane as an allergic reaction, all without ever taking them out of character.

I particularly enjoyed the 'discussion' about marine life, and cooties, when Steve finally woke up!

I really did enjoy this.

This was excellent! I hope you write more!

Absolutely loved it. Nice short story! Thanks for writing!

Oz

Great job

Well done, that was a really enjoyable story. Thanks for dusting it off and posting it.

Well, thank you very much for the dusting and posting.
I really enjoyed your story.

I really, really liked that, thanks a lot for sharing!
The banter was fantastic! :-)

Ohhhhh, how both of us have gotten distracted from our "prompts." AWESOME work here. So nice seeing the role reversal - and knowing it can be done and done WELL.

Awesome job! Loved this story!

That was really well done. I loved the verbal sparring between our guys (I think it was on point) and the way you moved back and forth in time. You did well showing Danny's concern without making it look like panic. I hope you write more H50 as I would love to read it.

An amazing story

Wow, this is a fabulous one-shot! Such a great story with the perfect amount of whump and bromance. Thanks for sharing!