This is so adorable, I love how Sherlock can't resist the kitten for long.

I thoroughly enjoy your stories and think your writing is getting better. The vocabulary is great, the sentence lengths vary, and the characters are very expressive and individual. Keep them coming!

So cute!

Goodness, what a cute, funny and adorable story! You really nailed the boys' characters and I can so picture Sherlock with the kitten.
And the final sentence: hilarious!

A good one probably a beautiful cat