You know sometimes you just come across certain fanfictions which make you wish that this was the real story. Man I just loved this HP series, I can't tell you how good it was. Like I said, it should've been the real story - honestly. I respect JK but I think this was much better done (maybe I'm liked it a bit more because I like strong spined people - no matter their gender). Amazing work man, just amazing.

I would like to read an outtake chapter of Lily and James watching their son improve and end the war.

You didn't mention if Harry and Ginny actually married...
Anywho, great story. Thoroughly enjoyed it.

Once I started I just couldn't stop, these were magnificently written and it just pulled me in, thank you

Hey I read this chapter on Friday 14th 2020 (Valentine's day!) Great story and even Greater series!

I wish it will never end

I appreciate you saving Sirius, so far. But wish you had not killed Ameilia.

Do the British use the term "guys". I don't know.

Wouldn't France be ahead of the UK?

Another Great Story,
Thankyou

It is a great alternate version of Harry Potter and his group. I would enjoy reading more detailed stories of Hogwarts and other characters,

I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too. Keep up your great works of art. I also hope you have more to these great story.

Thank you and Please,

Terri

Cool

awesome XD

Not bad, but has flaws that need working on. Too many instances of retelling stuff you have already told, too many incorrect sound-alikes. some issues with verb tenses and some illfitting americanisms. Please research UK weapon laws, for instance. Also... i do not think I have ever heard of a British ranch. Farm yes, ranch no.