Bruh 3 years?!

this and amourshipping
are my favorite

Honestly, change the summary completely to represent these 3 chapters, change the romance theme to Adventure/Romance or Adventure/Friendship and mark this fic as Completed.
It's a very round story with great action, capturing suspense and, above all, a very nice finish.

I believe you should leave this as is.

Good work!

The Wheel of Fate? Like, Legacy of Kain?

Please tell us you'll return and finish this?
What happens next?!

surprised you went full on legendary. tobias had to have a pokemon stronger than deoxys to have caught him in battle or did deoxys just like tobias and followed him?

This is the best Ash vs Tobias battle ever. You didn't go overpowering Ash to where he could just stomp Tobias with one Pokemon and you didn't bash on Tobias because in my opinion, he had a lot of potential as a character and potential Ally/rival of Ash, yet people just complain about him being a Gary-Stu character. along with Ash actually using the firepower necessary for his amazing strategies and not being an immortal 10 year old idiot. Although the battle against the guy with the magmotar, even if ash was using his sinnoh Pokemon should have somewhat more of a domination on his side seeing as in cannon, he got stomped by Tobias's four move using Darkrai. And the battle with Ash and Tobias should have been at least Champion level and not Elite Four lvl seeing as his Pikachu and Charzaird were at least Champion level by then. Other than that, one of the greatest Pokemon fanfics ever, please update!

I’d say Writer under training still has the best Ash vs Tobias battle, but he also has some of the best battles period. This wasn’t bad though

Awesome 3 chapters continue please.

Mate can you please update Effect of a Titanfall now seriously.

good pls update soon

Very good! That's a much better spot to end off if that's what you choose to do. Otherwise, I look forward to more in the future, should you choose to continue it...

When I watched Sinnoh, I always thought Cynthia was 18, since she is the youngest Champion ever, other than Red.

Based on Kanto Johto taking a year (Orange being during summer), Hoenn and Sinnoh being a year and a half, and finally Battle Frontier near a year. I pictured Ash 15 near 16. So figured the age difference about 2.

The age difference feels a little off, squeamish to me. I hope that isn't too bad a flame! Maybe possibly make her least 2 years or so difference and not much of a Persian(Cougar)?

Though will say FINALLY! AN UPDATE! I will say completely forgot about your story since been so long. Please I hope the wait is not as long for Chapter 4

Glad to see this is back. Another awesome battle and I liked that insight from Brock in the end about Ash's journey. Really good stuff and patiently waiting for more.

It took you 3 years to put this out, and I thought I'd be waiting for 5.