It's time to go get your revenge
So we back in the mine, got our pick axe swinging side to side, day and night
This task a grueling one, hope to find some diamonds tonight, oh how they shine
Then it's heads up, hear a sound you freeze up, turn around and look up, total shock fills your body,
Is this the end?
Can't believe it's you again
I could never forget those eyes
'Cause baby tonight, the creeper's trying to steal your stuff again, again, again
'Cause baby tonight, you grab your pick, shovel and bolt again, again, again
And run, run, run until it's done, done, then you run, run, run until the sun
Sun comes up in the morn'
'Cause baby tonight, the creeper's trying to steal your stuff again, again, again
Just when you think you're safe, hear some hissing from right behind, escape denied
That's a nice life you have, shame it's gotta end at this time, now you're mine
Then he blows up, and your health bar it drops, you could use a 1-up, get inside don't be tardy,
Now you're stuck in there, all alone in despair, half a heart is left now but don't die
'Cause baby tonight, the creeper's trying to steal your stuff again, again, again
'Cause baby tonight, you grab your pick, shovel and bolt again, again, again
And run, run, run until it's done, done, then you run, run, run until the sun
Sun comes up in the morn'
'Cause baby tonight, the creeper's trying to steal your stuff again, again, again
Captain Sparklez:
Dig up diamonds, and craft those diamonds
Looks like that armor's been exercising
MLG Pro, that diamond sword
Come at me bro, I got it forged
Training under the torch light glow
Hone that form now you're in the zone
Creepers out prowling, ready for the big fight
Show them what it feels like
Come on. Lets go!
'Cause I'm a warrior baby through and through
Take my revenge.
That's what I will do
Bring it
You gotta fight baby tonight
The creeper's trying to steal your stuff again
It's time to grab your sword, armor and go
It's time to go get your revenge
And you fight, fight like it's your last night, then you fight, fight like it's for your life
Time to show them your bite
'Cause baby tonight, the creeper's trying to steal your stuff again, again, again
'Cause baby tonight, the creeper's trying to steal your stuff again
Swing your sword up high
'Cause baby tonight, you grab your pick, shovel and bolt again
Swing your sword down low
It's time to go
It's time to go
It's time to go get your revenge

s t d im laughing

damn that sucks

Schennzed.

Schennzed.

A) That is not how you write dialogue.
B) That is not how you write sentences.
C) That is not how physics work, at all, in any part of the chapter.
D) You should judge all works by their first chapter, it's the point of the first chapter...and you failed.
E) Betas are easy to get, so fuckin' do it.
F) Several million lightyears? And in the same starsystem?
G) What portals are going on here? The only one I know of in the End is made of Bedrock.

Lol! 10/10 would read again!

Eeeehhh shit. Here we go.

Slap dat beetch.

Steve? Where?!

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No...

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Just...no...

You lit skillz suck a bit. But we kewl anywaiz! :3

Immediate adoption? Couldve waited a couple chapters, but I wont complain.

Immediate child instincts? I wouldve had the years of experiance overiding that, and had them drawn by a ten year old cursing at the ursa as he fought it. Cuz I know the crying was sposed to be an attentiom grabber! :P

Other than that, I enjoyed it!

Maybe she should choke on likang tower and take bleach shots

heir team name... STD (Sexually Transmitted Disease) you should have noticed that.
A tip.
all dialogue is supposed to be a in separate line from a paragraph.
Ex. Feeling angry, he threw his book at her. "You fucking bitch!" Needless to say he was quite angry. _
as opposed to this. Feeling angry he threw his book at her. "You fucking bitch!" Needless to say he was quite angry making speech in a new line makes it easier for the readers.