okay your a really good writer, im not just saying this, ibarley cry, iput up a no-cry-zone and blocked out that emoton, and yet i up your amazng work.

Why did you have to kill Natsu?! You know I despise sad stories! Well I'm going to cry my eyes out now. Bye~!

I really enjoyed your story I think I've read all of your stories now

I quiet like the story, it certainly did give me a little bit of the feels but I still have some friendly advice. Although the story was descriptive try using words other then 'said' 'looked' and 'she'. It's okay to have them in there a few times but I saw a bit of an overuse in them. Try replacing some of them for different words.
Example: '"Are you going to them again?" the blonde yelped at me with anger'. And instead of looked or watched you could try 'glanced' and 'stared'.
Other then that I found the story very good and easy to read. Keep up the good work!

Good job for a angst

Good story

Ha! You beat me! I just drove for 14 hours in a car (cause that's what you drive in) with my family... The sky has never turned orange at midnight though...

*Sobs*

Wow...I have no words. This is just so sad and I want to punch Natsu and at the same time comfort him...I'm confused. I don't know why I read angst stories either. They make me sad and sometimes make me cry and yet I keep reading them. It didn't help that this story was so damn realistic...like seriously, I bet there are countless cases like this in real life.

Anyway nice story and it served its purpose, which was to make you sad.