| Reviews for Second in Command |
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  Guest chapter 21 . 3/10 Aww it's to bad this was discontinued. The developing relationship between Hibari and Natsume me was interesting, I didnt feel like "Oh of course she's going to date him." it felt more like predator and prey to senpai and kouhai and possibly becoming rivals. The twins concept was better than I was expecting because, as a prior comment mentioned, one twin is always better or hates the other. It's obvious there's no hatred, just a damaged bond that will hopefully get back on the right track soon. I really enjoyed what you wrote! |
 foxchick1 chapter 21 . 1/13/2019 Curious to see what happens next. |
| Red-Hot Habanero chapter 21 . 10/3/2017 So I don't really like twin fics because it seems like one twin always hates the other in them. So when I read your description I almost past it over, but something told me it was going to be different. I was right, and I'm so happy that it is. Natsu and Tsuna truly love each other, but are to stubborn to clear the air. I also really enjoy your version of Gokudera. Usually in a twin fic he chooses one of the twins to follow, and is a jerk to the other; so it's nice to see him friendly with both. |
| YatogamiKushina chapter 17 . 12/7/2016 Sister-complex intensified XD |
| RandomUserGirl chapter 15 . 11/26/2016 I know it is still far but it would be interesting to see if Tsuna is the only one who 'died' in the future and Natsu is not informed about that either and Hibari Kyoya didn't tell her.. |
| XV chapter 5 . 3/13/2016 Oh shoot,Natsume's clothing's tore,Hibari's gunna get 'I'll bite you to death' |
| AkemiMimi chapter 9 . 8/27/2015 I cri I love what she wrote because its true keep up the good work and please update |
| Guest chapter 8 . 8/25/2015 Please continue! |
| AkemiMimi chapter 6 . 8/19/2015 Guys its official I ship Natsume and Hibari like nothing will compare and I really love this story so keep up the good work and a can't wait to read more |
| Guest chapter 5 . 8/19/2015 Im confused with the description of this story and the actual story. In the description i would of thought Iemitsu took Natsume away at a young age (like from around 3-5)and that that would ruin their bond. But still i like this story and cant wait for more |
| Arco-Alaude chapter 5 . 8/17/2015 I like where this is going but I feel as tho its missing some details or maybe its just me.. Good luck! |
| lidiagiron13 chapter 2 . 7/24/2015 I really like this story ! Hope u update soon |
| PondRiverWilliams chapter 2 . 7/24/2015 The feels came and attacked me because of this chapter. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/23/2015 Cant wait to find out why tsuna pushed her down and i also cant wait for more |
| belladu57 chapter 1 . 7/23/2015 Very good |
