The idea of maryoku is awesome
Can his wand and cloak have Releases
Update?

Please update when you have time! Its a good book so far, can't wait to read more

Quite a nice story. Would the sword of Griffindore work as a vessel for Sougyo no Kotowari? Or is it ancient enough to hold its own spirit?

Also, if it goes as it did in Canon, Harry is gonna get PISSED when Riddle snatches his wand.

I dont get the fans who think Harry should have been placed in Slytherin. The bigotry and elitism was extremely blatant (ex. They actually used "pureblood" as a password in the middle of a school incident when their classmates were being threatened and attacked. In effect condoning the violence and discrimination. This is (theoretically) a post war country. This should have been comparable to a "Sieg Heil!" after WWII).

... and again I am critiquing a children's story far too seriously.

Honestly, no matter how much I like the premise of the story I cannot enjoy this when he has so much to learn but just pushes it off like a fucking retard

I really hate stories like this where Harry obviously is happy about magic and is smart so why the actual fuck isn't he reading up on whatever he could
That's just called being retarded not lazy or not having time because obviously he has plenty of time if he can meditate and speak to all 3 of his spirits every day

Bro, are you ever coming back to this? It’s really entertaining to read and it has a lot of great characterization and some hot takes so pleeeeeeease update when you get a chance. Thank!

Great story you should continue it please

Awesome story

Okay, I'm done. It started really interesting but you took a good idea and dragged it through the mud. I hate it when Harry has a unique power and then just gives it to everyone else. This was abandoned, but I would bet every penny I own that by the end of this fic, every single friend of Harry's would have awakened their 'wand spirit'. Not only that but now you have him sorted in gryffindor? Your Harry is perhaps the most now-gryffindor Harry I've ever read about in a fanfiction.

So far.. literally nothing’s changed from cannon

love it
dont let it like this
hope you continue

...QUIRRELMORT!

Good Work...! 8

Good Work...! 7