this story is so chaotic that at times it's rly hard to read or to know what just happened.

boring ass fights

Kakuna’s gonna be a beast

This story is the shit man, fantastic

Just found this story. Ash seems like a real idiot so far, made worse that he's basically raised as oaks grandson. He totally forgot about catching krabby. Okay, maybe understandable if he expected it to keep its word. But then he completely forgot about catching eevee like a day later. The fuck? Totally pathetic, he didn't learn from the first time. Also, why did you keep calling bulbasaur a cow? That's totally stupid.

you know whqt im done for now

you have a horrible sense of op

absolutely useless ash useless you are weaker than youngster joey

wow sending 13 year olds to this holy shit

personally this is hard to get into

its good to know that the anime made ash op not only losing to samu4ai but he has no idea how to take care of pokemon

why does ash only get young pokemon a young bulbasour a young eevee

Man this is angsty

to be hijonest i like ur writing but ash is such a wimp that its depressing. usually most trainers have a prob with one pokemon at a time so its easier and dosent feel like the mc is a total looser. ash seems bipolar and dosent remember shit eventhough he studied for years for this. none of his pokemon are interesting to read about as gore dosent listen much, same with crabby, bulba is scared always and ash keeps shouting. idk why he even took the vulpix. if a pokemin2dosent want to stay with the trainer amd keeps trying to kill him the sensible thing to do is to give it to a sanctuary or release it not keep with him and risk everyone on the team. for a guy who follows the league he doesn't know who the gum leaders are or even recognize bruno, which is ridiculous.

Thanks for a great time spent on reading this fic ;) I hope to see more of your works soon. I only regret not seeing Gore evolving at the end of the last chapter Ah well, there is always a chance for that in the future! Cheers