Short and sweet. Lovey

I’m not very familiar with any work of Shakespeare so I can’t comment on whether or not you achieved the task... however I am very sure that you will have done.
You characterised Hermione very well. I can imagine very easily that she would do something similar to this to avoid an arranged marriage. And Remus, what a love, taking Hermione/Henry in without much of a second thought.
I spotted only one minor typo:
[red-heaad] has an extra ‘a’
My only complaint would be that it is far too short and I would have loved to have read more of Hermione and Remus getting to know each other and falling in love.
Oh and one more additional though, the use of the houses as the kingdom names was a great idea.
Great fic, Liza :D

Poor confused Remus. "I'm not gay so why do I like him?"

Remus/Hermione isn't really my thing and neither is hating on Ron but I did think the AU was really interesting. It was something not often seen before and I really liked the spin you put on Harry Potter. It was cool how you wrote it in the style of old times and they talked very civilized. I do have a critique when she fell in love just after a week - "who wouldn't fall in love with someone like Remus Lupin?". Well, we barely know anything about Remus at that point except that he was kind enough to take her in and that he likes books, and you didn't elaborate on why he loved her. Other than that, it was well written and easy read. Good job.

That was cute :) really different from the norm.

*squeal of like 500 emotions at once* Whoa Liza.

Okay, first. The kingdoms. I love them. Love them. Like a lot. You don't even understand.

2. Remember how I said in my review of 'His Past is Her Future' that you were gonna make me ship Remus/Hermione? Well my prediction came true here! *squeal*

3. I don't really like your interpretation of Ron :/ Only thing I didn't like. I just have a soft spot for him, Chudley Cannons and all.

4. Aw, the Tonks thing was so sad! D:

5. I quickly looked up Twelfth Night and this thing was perfect.

That's it for me!

Amy

Liza Liza Liza! Why must your writing always be so perfectly beautiful? (Don't answer that question, I already know your answer. Its because you're awesome, isn't it?)
Remus and Hermione is such a wonderful pairing, its only topped by Remus and Sirius. Although, its surprisingly hard to find a decent or even good Remus/Hermione fic.
And this, this wasn't just decent or good, this was gorgeous.
I am, however, a little disappointed there was no mention whatsoever of Sirius, but I get why. It would have been an automatic response to pair Remus with Sirius or to throw Sirius into the mix and create a trio pairing of Sirius, Hermione and Remus. XD
I absolutely love how you incorporated all those little details in there, like turning all the houses into Kingdoms and Tonks not caring for books, that was beautiful. How do you do it?!
With such stunning stories, Liza, there is no wonder why you Magpies are in the fonals. You totally deserve it. Win this thing for me, Liza! You can do this! Good luck!

Okay, I once again swallowed my inner Remadora shipper down to read one of your stories ;)
I must say that I really liked this story, I enjoyed reading it a lot! :)
The idea was very original while still having the characterisations right (even though you changed Dora a bit, for the sake of the story and its pairing).
I liked how Hermione had the courage to go and flee from a situation she did not wanted to be in, doing what many women would not have dared.
Also, I was grinning when she disguised herself as a man, a classic thing, but it is still working without being boring ;)
The question is, if Ronald should come back after Hermione admitted to be a woman and is living with Remus, wouldn't they have a sliiiight problem?
Well, Remus was very quick in counting one and one together when he heard the description...
I liked this a lot, well done :)

More please!

cute!

I haven’t actually read Twelfth Night, but after reading this I think that I probably should.

I think Hermione’s first impressions of Ron were very realistic – and probably quite similar to how she originally viewed him in canon – though I do hope that he gets better the more you get to know him. I also really love how the Hogwarts Houses are the different regions.

The only typo I noticed was in [red-heaad]; this was incredibly well written and beautifully executed. I’ve never read the pairing before, but you made it incredibly believable and I’ll probably be reading it more in the future. They seem to work very well together.

This was o well done! I’m a tiny bit jealous XD I struggled so much with that prompt; it took me ages to get it done. But you did a wonderful job with it. Everyone fit so well into the play. It’s wonderful how you were able to do that and also keep their personalities, even though I’m not someone who minds when things are OOC. Great job with the prompt and in coming up with such a creative idea.

I really enjoyed this! I think that despite the fact it's marriage law, you took that in an entirely new direction with this pairing and by shifting the focus away from the law. I think you delved into the character-bashing territory with Ron, but it's first impressions and Hermione isn't thinking positive about it all to begin with - she's likely to only see the negatives. You did a really great job at simplifying a complex plot into a oneshot and it was wonderfully written, well done!

What a lovely AU! I haven't actually read Twelfth Night, but I'll trust that there are appropriate parallels. XD Hermione running away is perfectly in character to me, and disguising herself as a boy was brilliant, I think. I loved her yelling at Nymphadora over how she treated Remus's gift. I also love how this is Remus/Hermione, especially in the context of this AU, it sounds lovely. (Also I love how you incorporated other HP things like the Houses into this!)

Awww this was so sweet. I like how you adapted the play to your story and the HP characters. Ron is definitely a cad, and Harry was so sweet to lend Hermione his clothes so she could assume her new identity.
I almost laughed when you revealed that Tonks started to like Hermione instead of Remus. But the way Hermione defended Remus was great.
The ending was so sweet and I like how they eventually got together. Great job. There were one or two SPaG errors in there.