Reviews for Penumbra I: Falls the Shadow
Gin110881 chapter 15 . 1h
I'm really glad to see another update. Though, I'm afraid that I have to read from the beginning again. I remember that I've read everything of this story you've posted on SIYE, and that I was pretty curious what you're up to. Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next update.
Toghgal chapter 14 . 2/23
It’s always so hard reading fanfiction compared to the original and realizing how different the series would have been if it hadn’t started out as a children’s book. War is hard and merciless. Unfortunately, Voldemort seems to have gotten himself into a pickle here with the goblin nation. Looking forward to reading the second half. Thanks for the update!
Gin110881 chapter 14 . 1/21
It feels so good to get an update. I can't wait to read what'll happen next.
TimeShifter chapter 14 . 1/20
Glad to see you've returned! That's a very interesting ending. As long as nothing changes, Voldemort might as well think that he's been lead completely astray and take it out on the allies of the goblin who came to him. Not sure it'll save anyone on the village at this point though. Well I certainly don't wish the type of retribution Voldemort enacts on anyone, I'm not sure why that goblin believed he was the better side to support.
Guest chapter 13 . 12/20/2019
Please continue this story! It’s like nothing I’ve read before, so refreshing!
Gin110881 chapter 13 . 6/18/2019
Hi, I just wanted to let you know that you are not forgotten and hope you are still working on the story. I plan to read the rewritten part 1 and the part 2 on Siye as soon as the rewrite is completed. No pushing, though. I just wanted to say Hi and see if you're still there.
Toghgal chapter 13 . 2/10/2019
It’s refreshing to see a Molly who comes around to Ginny. Most of the time Molly is pseudo-manipulating to try and get Ginny out of the picture. Your story shows how it could go the other way.

This is a really complex story, which makes it fun to read. I can tell you’ve spent time working out the plot and motives of all the different players. It reads really well.
Gellert99 chapter 13 . 2/9/2019
Great story. I'm looking forward to reading more!
TheRealTonks chapter 13 . 2/9/2019
Glad to see another update! I love your story. I love your Ginny. Can't wait to see more of her.
Gin110881 chapter 12 . 1/28/2019
I've been patiently waiting for you to complete this story so I can reread all the parts at once. I really hope you have not given up! I want to read all the planned five books some day.
marthethea chapter 12 . 11/13/2018
I just found this story yesterday, and I must tell you, your writing is absolutely brilliant. I love just about everything with this story (though, some of the goblin stuff isn’t quite in my taste, but your writing makes it interesting).

The way you’ve set up everything is so good; I love the darker tones of this, and just how much more serious this is than HP7:DH.

My favorite parts of this story, though, have been the characterization. Especially Ginny and Harry, and I find myself enjoying Bill a lot more now, as well. Ginny truly gets to shine in your story, which I will forever appreciate, since she is my favorite character.

I cannot wait to see where this will go; keep up the amazing writing! 3
bridget237 chapter 12 . 10/22/2018
I stumbled upon this today and I absolutely love it. I’m happy that Ginny, Luna, and Neville are taking an active role in the war, it shows a realistic view that even young people are not ignorant or shielded from war. Overall this is very well written and have enjoyed reading so far. Hope to read more! Thank you:)
Patronusdoe chapter 12 . 9/25/2018
Your story is a masterpiece! Can’t wait to read more.
Linny Weasley chapter 11 . 8/21/2018
i love this fic, mainly because of Ginny. She is my favourite character, and I like to see her like that... strong, independent, but with some moments showing "weakness", because after all we are all humans.
Thank you for this story and I'll keep reading.
I'm excited to see her training the DA.
I have a uncompleted story with Ginny as a stronger character too, and after years I'm trying to get back to that. I want to rewrite it and finish it. And when I read fics like this...that inspires me.
I do not usually review, but I thought it would be nice to write something in yours.
TheRealTonks chapter 11 . 8/16/2018
Great to see another update! I loved it, especially that Ginny s working for the Order now.
Thinking back to the earlier version, I take it there'll be two more chapters?
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