Reviews for A Living Lie
Trjz chapter 32 . 8/16
Thanks for the awsome story
Kitsune675 chapter 32 . 5/9
Lo ame! Continué por favor!️
laurajustin chapter 32 . 3/17
Great story! Can't wait for the next update!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/14
Honestly had good aspirations that this might be playing the whole identity dissatisfaction thing , like naruto doesn’t enjoy being himself and the. Constructs the fake persona which he comes to enjoy being more then naruto.
I have trouble faulting your writing but this is feeling sorta like ageneric (Strong!) naruto fic
Marquesa-Izumi chapter 19 . 3/10
"Não se preocupe, mãe. Eu lhe darei muito sangue em breve."
Sasuke não tentou passar por ele, e caminhou uma boa distância atrás dele.
Kkkk
Cdesousa5 chapter 13 . 3/10
Really wish he would’ve kept the sword
Illuminated chapter 32 . 3/10
Love me a competent woman!
Kingkong101 chapter 30 . 3/10
Nothing new
Ashmole chapter 32 . 3/10
So, wait. Either Naruto is locked in his own mind and the Kyubbi is running around or Naruto was shoved out of his own mind by the Fox and is panicking and running away. It is unclear. I really loved this Fic as it is a unique concept. Just praying it does not die an undeserved death of cliche. I like how you portray the characters and how things are going. Just hope things continue. I honestly cannot think of where you are going with this. Only that your portrayal of Jiraiya is superb and this is going to be a cluster with the invasion. How will Naruto be involved if at all? Will him dragging away Jiraiya screw part of the village with the summons? Or will this culminate in a confrontation with Garra that will get Jiraiya involved somehow since Ryuto has not yet signed a contract or will something else take care of this? Will Garra get to rampage a little in the village? Actually that gives me an idea. Since 3rd and Orochimaru duke it out on the roof how about Garra crashes it literally as Shukaku breaking the barrier and forcing a 3 way battle between the Biju Orochimaru and the Edo Tensei and the 3rd Hokage and his Anbu. I have never seen that done before and can be a good way to tie up loose ends while remaining original.
uchihaNaruto247 chapter 32 . 3/10
Man naruto be reminding me of the winter soldier, it’s just that he’s not being controlled by outside forces
Illuminated chapter 18 . 2/5
I love that u handled the second test differently than all the other authors I have read.
Nbs chapter 7 . 2/5
I read this chapter later at night and had to suppress my laughter, so as not to come off as insane
Guest chapter 31 . 2/4
Tease XD
uchihaNaruto247 chapter 31 . 2/4
Ok I haven’t read this story in a while, but did naruto get any training done at all?
H3llion chapter 30 . 12/12/2019
It'd be nice to finally see Naruto leaving that village to truly find peace within himself.. hopefully he'll be able to. Konoha has done too much damage to him :(
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