So good! I love this!
Actually, I was very surprised by how the other team players, meaning Miles and Terence, reacted and that they stood by Adrian. Positively surprised.
I think you portrayed the characters very credible which makes a good story for me :) Also, I love your writing style.
Good job :)
Yours, Marla

Great story! I could actually see this happening!

I think you could make this into a story- really great start!