Oh my gods, if there was one Zoe fanfic that was official, it would be this one. Di Immortales! This is GOOD!

this was recommended on tvtropes
I was stupid enough to read it all

Brilliantly written.

i don't go here but SOMEBODY sure does have a quality writing...someone sure did just increase the depth of my understanding and love of zoe's character by 100%...someone
also thalia talking to zoe's constellation? zoe wishing they had been friends in life? thalia's growing maturity and solemnity as a hunter and lieutenant? good shit
also listen...listen...don't "my lady" my zartemis ass what made you think i would survive that jay? what?
10/10 would read again

What are you talking about, Jay? I've totally already reviewed this...

Initial thought: Damn.

Second thought after the initial thought: Damn, Jay. Daaaaaaaaaaaamn.

I just, wow. The style you've used for this is A-plus because it has this lyrical way of moving that reminds me of the tumblr poetry about the stars and the galaxies. I can see that you've put in a lot of effort, and it shows because it feels like each sentence has a Special Meaning to my pretentious self. The part in particular with Alcyone, and that emotion with the hearing the Greek language. Me gusta.

Anyway, envious of your prose atm. It's good stuff.

Also:

'Tonight is not like other night' Ma nishtanah halailah haze...

this is singularly THE BEST Zoe fic i've ever read! THANK. YOU.

This was lovely.

This is certainly different from all Zoë fics I've read, Zoë is one of my favorite PJO characters and it's good to see the depths of her character being explored, having been heartbroken and banished from her only home at such a young age, two thousand years of hunting and absence of love, this story is interesting in that way, hope more authors would do this.

tfw you write a review halfway and accidentally post it
like you did such a great job with this fic though, it's so pretty and each of the words that you has a /purpose/ and its all character building or character study or character development and it's so great
(but tbh this could have been better w zoe/orion's dog. where is zoe/orion's dog? jay how could u leave out the otp, i am disappoint and deducting a whole ten marks)
but the fic is really well written and i really enjoyed it and how you explored zoe's character and it made me cry, so fuck you and your garbage, and also you're garbage

okay so i promised i would review this (and also post-mortem, give me a while) and this is a fantastic fic 12/10 made me cry i hate you this much.
there are so many small touches in this fic that make it really great? like the "what do i seek?" "my lady" thing, and the description and imagery is so pretty, and the first line is literally a pun (that is awful, you are awful and should be simultaneously proud and ashamed).

didn't feel like logging in BUT LOOK IM COMMENTING ON YOUR FIC THROUGH MY TEARS. ok most of this fic was like me crying but at the end you made me do the thing where i smiled as i teared up it was v confusing thanx xoxo

o mfg ur fic sucks so much!1111!

wtf y would u even write this. like an accurate characterization of zoe that does a brilliant job of exploring her emotions as she comes to terms with her death? ew no y would u think sum1 would want 2 read that. zoe does not make out with a SINGLE character in this fic wtf? i feel like dis is a huge loss on ur part. like u had so many opportunities. zoe/artemis, zoe/orion, and like best of all zoe/orion's dog. but u... took none of them? i CANNOT believe

zoefic without romance? Does Not Compute everyone Must Romance!

im very angry abt this fic u shud delete it immediately and replace it with sum pertemis or percy/zoe! or else u will feel my WRATH

Now THIS is the kind of characterization that Zoe Nightshade deserves.

It was amazing and I love it so so much. You managed to take what little characterization RR gave us and develop Zoe really well, and it's just /so good/.

It's also a really interesting topic, one that I haven't seen before, and I definitely think you did it justice. The constellations you chose fit the narrative very well.

Also "What do I seek?" "My lady" is absolutely PERFECT. It's subtle enough that I didn't notice it until you pointed it out, but now I'm like "I can't believe I missed that". It's very clever and very Zoe– and I love that she finally gets closure at the end.

Okay I'm going to cry about Zoe Nightshade now bye.

Awesome. If only we had a fanfic like this

Good story.