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I TEALLY LOVE THIS OMIHGODS

I-... I very much love this AU. 3

I want to know more it's eating me alive! Update as soon as you can, please

lol the reveal that the "captain" was Selena killed me

I LOVE THIS! THIS IS AMAZING! I'M SO PROUD!

I like how you found a way to put Yugo's amnesia in and Yusho reacting to Yugo! But there's one thing that needs to make clear: Yugo is in Slifer red(the only GX sub I watched was season 4)?! Did Yuri realized he hit Yugo too hard and take him in? Serena is Captain! Nice!

Keep on writing!

Nice! Thanks for telling readers about my prompt! Take your time with it but I want to how it's going.

Keep on writing!

This was VEEEEEEEEEEEEERY interesting! I like this! XD Woooooow!

Ummm...do you still have that drawing on Tumblr? Cause I'm interested in seeing what the Yu-boy's looked like...and I can't find anything on Tumblr, the Search function is that bad...could you maybe send me a link if it isn't too much trouble?

All of those WIP look awesome XD keep up the good work!

This is so sad! You should make more!

Wow...this was a nice poem with a deep message. I love how you portrayed their feelings and tied in their age with it, showing how even though their years are young, their mindset and knowledge of the outside world made them feel older, more mature...more scarred. I was thinking of veterans when I read this, and it made me wonder if they (even if they are much older) shared those thoughts and wishes...in a way.

Great job! This was a very interesting chapter! )

Yknow i really wanna see more of this portion.

. . . . . Nevermind. -.-

Ear, by Ute you mean Yuto, right? Because . . I have no idea where you got Ute from. But yeah, this was awesome! Love it! Hope to see more like this! :)

Could the next shot (or the one after) feature how Yuya and Zuzu met. I picture it with her being a year OLDER than him with Yuya being really timid and never stood up for himself, something like that.

Ok, Yuya is 11 and has discovered pendulum summoning, Yuto is around canon Shun's age and is a bit more mature, Yuri is now a girl(just imagine how she must be during her time of the month), and Yugo is the same.

Why is Yugo the same?! Yugo is my favorite!

Can you write one on how the Professor needs the Bracelet girls and Yugo to fuse and synchronize the four worlds. Yugo was captured by Yuri but Rin manages to escape by using Clear Wing and Yugo's duel runner. Clear Wing leads her to Yuto, who confused on why Ruri is riding a motorcycle and is asking him if he was fusion.

When he asks Rin what she was doing and why fusion which makes Rin very angry. After her best friend(and crush) was kidnapped by a guy with said best friend's face and has been chasing after him for who knows how long then someone who has Yugo's face appears, wearing an outfit similar to Yuri's clothes although he was only wearing a black cloak with a hood, this guy has the nerve to say Yugo's name wrong!

She battles him with Clear Wing and was winning until Shun and the Resistance appear. She disappears until she sees Yuto again in Miami City. When she meets Yuya, she thought he was Yugo but he acts similar to Yugo and didn't say Yugo's name wrong when he said he wasn't Yugo. When Yuzu came, she was teleported away while Yuto stayed with Yuya because Yuya managed to keep Rin distracted from dueling Yuto. Why Yuto wasn't teleported away might be because of Rin's bracelet.

You can think of the rest if you're willing to do it.

Man! That was long! I would write it myself but I'm fortunately I'm not good with writing details.

Hope you like what I said. Keep continuing this I like it! No, love it!

Bye!