Reviews for Broken Rules |
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ratatoskr chapter 6 . 5/21 hmm Leorio is related to Rolan, right? |
batman chapter 1 . 5/19 Man, the story is great, the OC are actually good and I love the concept of God coming back, I wish more stories did this |
Uday Sra chapter 20 . 1/23 Awesome. please update |
EdgyBro chapter 12 . 6/20/2019 Ugh, why he didn't resurrect Yasaka and Asia first. He should have listen to Rolan about ressurecting the people he is closest to first. |
EdgyBro chapter 11 . 6/20/2019 Wow, shit just hit the fan. Why didn't Artemis left a some of his Djinn Sentinels to guard Kuoh? Now with Yasaka dead and Kunou captured, I hope Artemis get serious when he came back. Then again, Sir Rolan the Black Sun is here with Dragoon Issei, he would probably be scared shitless or confused. |
EdgyBro chapter 9 . 6/19/2019 Artemis is going to shat a brick when Rolan shows up in front of him lol. |
EdgyBro chapter 6 . 6/19/2019 Dang, Artemis could use 7 gears without his armor. Assuming each gear improves your parameters by 100%, 7 gears would mean Artemis would have roughly 128 times the normal human's strength. Now I really want Godking Artemis to be summoned as a Caster servant and just punt every enemy servants into the sky with his fist lol, One Punch Man style. |
EdgyBro chapter 1 . 6/18/2019 Never expected Godking Dalang is the Devil lol |
omegaru chapter 20 . 3/2/2019 Absolutely love reading this fanfic. I’ve read it multiple time. Can’t wait for it to be updated. |
Aetherium21 chapter 14 . 10/11/2018 Wait why the hell can Issei not use his damn brain for a second? I know his nigh unparalleled idiocy is somehow a trademark for him, but how the hell can he not yet have grasped the implications of devils’ reincarnation and what the lack of consent means. His mentor was quite literally a slave to Falbium and Artemis has even mentioned failsafes for insubordination and rebellion in the pieces |
Aetherium21 chapter 14 . 10/11/2018 Fantastic story, absolutely better than 95% of any other DxD stories I’ve seen on FanFiction and I’ve combed through most at this point. I’m baffled at the relatively low number of reviews and favorites. You and Third Fang make top-quality stories |
Parapraxis A51 chapter 1 . 9/25/2018 awesome keep it coming |
RealisticCrow chapter 20 . 8/4/2018 Cant wait for theaftermath of assaulting Vatican! looking forward for more! |
Thatconspiracygu chapter 20 . 6/14/2018 Due to the fact that he seemingly produces godsair and that he's one of the people Phillips has trained, I'm guessing Issei is the new ruler? |
EvilStorm101 chapter 20 . 5/4/2018 I just wanted to say hey and... HOLY SHIT *ahem* this story is probably my favourite thing on this website and one of the best things I have ever read, I love Dalang and peter and literally everything else in this story, I was curious where you got the inspiration to create such a masterpiece, the other worlds the sun sphears the laws of the universes being made into people and just EVERYTHING. I can’t wait for you to release more chapters, and you could actually make a real book with this concept and if you do and even if you just continue with this story you will have my support all the way!. You’re friendly reader and massive fan Storm Silverclaw Evilstorm101 |