This story is beautiful. I love Neville and Hannah working together, and their relationship strengthening from their common goal. The ending was so well done. Great job!

This story was an absolute delight. I really appreciate this take on an older Hannah and Neville!

Omg. I am bawling. This is such a sweet idea. That they try to make them better. I love how they don't succeed fully just a tiny bit. I think that it is very much in tune with the books. Love it, love it, love it.

Aah, a Fawlty Towers reference :) The best!

Brilliant. Especially they way you handled the ending. Well done.

Amazing story! The writing was incredibly powerful and gripping. Great job!

A lovely start to the story. I enjoyed reading about Neville and Hannah, as I don't often read about them - and I loved Snape's appearance in portrait form. I can definitely imagine him lurking in the office to avoid parties with the other portraits. One minor typo that I spotted when Hannah is talking to her portrait self: you first put Hannah as 'Hermione' - which confused me for a while. However, I love the idea of someone having a conversation with the portrait version of themselves, which insists on holding back information. I have an idea about what Neville might be up to and I look forward to finding out if I'm right or not in the next installment.

My curiosity is piqued. Looking forward to seeing what comes next.