Reviews for Suspicious Minds
Whatfunny chapter 12 . 11/27/2018
very nice story! very well written!
GingietheSnap chapter 6 . 11/26/2018
I am really, really enjoying this!
GingietheSnap chapter 3 . 11/26/2018
Yowza! The cardinal's new "creature." This is going to be extremely interesting! bwahaha
GingietheSnap chapter 1 . 11/26/2018
You've got me hooked!
GingietheSnap chapter 12 . 11/23/2015
Excellent story with a suspenseful, twisty plot. You left me worried that Etienne is still going to betray Aramis and the Queen!
Kirasum chapter 12 . 10/29/2015
Thank you so much for not giving up on this story. I like the ending. Etienne will be maybe a character Athos will meet on one of your other stories. The change from being friends and family first, to becoming enemies and strangers in the end. (Just one little thought). I like how you end your story, with Athos and his three brothers united again. And the death of the Cardinal, so the imminent threat is gone for the moment and Athos didn't has to share Aramis secret with his friends in order to protect Aramis. Have a great Weekend.
wotumba1 chapter 12 . 10/29/2015
glad that Athos has his Brothers back at his side!
great story
wotumba1 chapter 10 . 10/29/2015
There seems to be no way out for Athos...
wotumba1 chapter 8 . 10/29/2015
poor Athos. now he is truly alone
wotumba1 chapter 7 . 10/29/2015
what a snake!
wotumba1 chapter 3 . 10/29/2015
so that's the mysterious benefactor behind all the Money...
wotumba1 chapter 1 . 10/28/2015
hmm, could Etienne really be a competition?
Buckeye01 chapter 12 . 10/25/2015
I've always sided with Athos in this story, as I understood his desire to stand by family- what I disliked was the other three taking sides . You did an excellent job of creating a rift between the boys... it sure created a lot of tension, both for the boys and the readers!

To Aramis's line, "Porthos and I shouldn't have been so quick to choose sides." I would like to do a "Gibbs slap" to the back of his head. And while I'm at it, when he said that "he shouldn't have given in to temptation" I would really like to say, "Yeah, You THINK?" and do another "Gibbs slap!"

Ok, sorry... just ranting. Very nice ending to this emotional-packed story!
Tidia chapter 12 . 10/25/2015
What a great ending especially working in canon. It was clever!
LovinJackson chapter 12 . 10/25/2015
I love how you have played this into episode 1 of season 2 ,... very clever. I could feel Athos' relief on the news of the Cardinal.

Speaking of the cardinal. I am meeting the man himself next month :)

Well done with this story. I have thoroughly enjoyed it.
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