Reviews for Fastbreak
jerkchickenz chapter 10 . 10/23/2018
Thirsty!Bonnie is my least favorite Bonnie. I can't believe all the disrespect she put up with from Kai just to hang on to him. Pathetic!
choclit98 chapter 10 . 5/28/2018
So smart, confident, self-assured, queen of school Bonnie sees her idiot boyfriend cheating on her before her eyes, and she not only sticks with him but has decided to give into his demands for sex?!

I sincerely hope that you have Bonnie smarten up and rids herself of Kai she makes the biggest mistake of her life.
xbmo chapter 10 . 4/9/2018
Great story! I’m excited for more!
DamonSalvatoresbird chapter 10 . 2/27/2018
Bamon is making me so happy together! Love this!
Guest chapter 10 . 1/29/2018
Good story I hope Bonnie bumps into Damon outside her house and he talk some sense into her. Tell her she shouldn’t have to give up her virtue if she’s not ready and be smart about this...Anywho I hope you continue this I’m anxious to see what will happen next
PielCanela44 chapter 10 . 7/17/2017
WOW Pleaseeeeeeee continue with the story is so Goooood... Also please make something happen with Bonnie and with Kai can't stand his behind.. Don't give up your goody for that ungrateful B-tard lol...
Guest chapter 10 . 7/14/2017
Uh no bonnie stooop riight there. Dont do it.
NatashaBryant chapter 10 . 7/15/2017
Bonnie is being dumb .
NatashaBryant chapter 5 . 7/15/2017
guys can be real assholes sometimes . It's really sickening
NatashaBryant chapter 3 . 7/15/2017
I don't like how they kiss Bonnie's ass . She needs to reevaluate herself and get over herself all of them do !
NatashaBryant chapter 1 . 7/15/2017
So much arrogance in the air lol . They all need to be slapped back into reality !
Christine Monpremier chapter 10 . 7/13/2017
Oh COME ON BONNIE STOP BEING DESPERATE AND GIVE UP ON THIS SHIT BAG
MaNiQ1 chapter 10 . 7/15/2017
I love this story and how real it feels. I read some comments about weak-minded Bonnie! But I'm not sure what story they are reading this is the average teenage girls story a lot of girls go through this and have to learn what they want and make these decisions. Me personally, I don't think she'll have sex with Kai. I think guys know how to get an upper hand on girls by ignoring them. Girls hate silence and since he has Katie he can do that to her and not feel the agony of missing her since obviously he's getting busy elsewhere. You've done an amazing job of building Bonnies character up. She's always came off as a strong character imo never weak in this story. You've done an amazing job building her persona, and what she values. Her and Damon have been built up perfectly and I love how you wrote them. I can't wait to read your next chapter. Keep up the amazing story telling. Hope to see some more progression with her and Damon. Happy writing!
MaNiQ1 chapter 4 . 7/15/2017
Loved this chapter. The argument was my favorite part and finding out Damon heard them. Can't wait to see things start to be thrown off the tracks. Great chapter!
MaNiQ1 chapter 1 . 7/15/2017
Love this ):
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