Reviews for Awakening
Guest chapter 3 . 5/4
yo update this story was going places
Guest chapter 3 . 3/7
Update?
Alouette.Valentine chapter 1 . 10/20/2019
I am going crazy with the Onii-chan and Onee-chan. Who's older? Canon-wise, Zeref is the Onii-chan of Natsu.

Natsu keeps calling "Her", Oneechan, while Zeref calls him Onii-chan. So, who's older among the two? Can't help but twitch everytime this came up.
soundbreaker chapter 3 . 7/7/2019
Weirdly I'm into this. I don't know I don't explain it I'm really into this I must be coming down with something cuz I...shit...shit I think I'm well just I did I read this man I just one more yeah yo can you write in all this?
casey jones chapter 1 . 2/2/2019
i loved it
alord2011 chapter 1 . 11/18/2018
this story was pretty good just wish it was longer
CallMeShaun132 chapter 3 . 8/6/2018
Man it’s been so long. I’m wondering if your ever going to return. Ive missed you man it’s nearly been 3 years. Hope you come back soon. Have a good morning/day/evening/night.
And
Shaun has left the building.
Harem King Natsu chapter 3 . 5/6/2018
This is a very good story! so please make more
justaweekndfan chapter 1 . 5/2/2018
AYE! #XOTWOD
daniel2610994 chapter 1 . 3/9/2018
Oh man I simply love this story, the fact that it has the forbidden fruit between natsu and zeref only makes it way hotter hehe.
Guest chapter 3 . 12/26/2017
Please add Jenny to the harem and really good chapter
Guest chapter 1 . 12/18/2017
'What's the fun in a normal life?' now that... well there is no fun in a normal life. Right now.. well I'm definitely not living a normal life! Hehe, great story, but it's sad because it's 2017 right now and you last updated in November 1 2015 :(
Guest chapter 3 . 12/18/2017
Great chapter please continue the story and add Kinana please
Guest chapter 3 . 12/3/2017
Great chapter and please add kinana to the harem please
lilpix123 chapter 3 . 11/26/2017
great story update it please its awsome
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