i had to read this out loud to my friend...
now im hanging from a tree being recorded by jack plaul

Hate to be "that guy" but I'm pretty sure you used the word "keening" incorrectly.

I swear to god, I've seen this a million times, and still don't know what this means. WHAT DO YOU MEAN BY "Is your hand bleeding?" I SWEAR TO GOD, WHAT?! please if you see this, though I doubt you will WHAT DOES THIS MEAN

OMG

Awwwww...they make the cutest couple

MK does follow Kirby pretty much everywhere, hey? Haha.

I love the premise of this story. So precious. Being new to Kirby, I might not be in a position to judge how IC they are (also I'm watching the sub), but it seemed perfect to me. I love how you describe Kirby's feelings towards MK as a crush. It's easy to see that Kirby looks up to him and admires him and it makes for such a cute dynamic!

Sighh those two are great together. Thanks for sharing this!

This was wrote really well. You captured Kirby's conflict of feelings, excitement and first-time experience excellently. Meta Knight's patience and affection was also great to read making him an approachable and warming character.
I like the ending as well. Rounded off the whole thing beautifully.

You're brilliant. Really. I like the way you actually shaped a personality for the two and created a storyline instead of just a fuck. Also, random Spanish from Meta is awesome~
I'd sure like to see more