I am slightly confused. Did Erza and Mira treat him differently prior to Lisanna’s death in this story? Because it seemed like they were both a bit ooc if all they ever did was tease him in Mira’s case and punish him in Erza’s and Natsu seemed ooc too if that is how they acted.

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Turning your fic into basically a Mira vs Erza competing for Natsu instead of developing the existing Natsu/Mira relationship they made was...odd.

On one hand I don't see Mira giving up something she already won, let alone not taking Natsu's feelings into account before making such a decision. On the other hand, she is someone who would want to make a clear victory over her rival.

Mysterious... sure whatever you say.

This chapter things took a bad turn.
Natsu was way too careless in attacking the guy on his own place where he make experiments. Natsu may have better senses but still need to think a little before he act like that.

Never expected to see Erza there, but I'm glad she is, she even managed to save Natsu from a bad fate, Mira was angry but now she maybe saw a younger Yukino on the floor.
Or is a Illusion of Lisa to fool her and capture for experiments.
Had to wait for the next chapter to find out.

Keep the good work. Until the new update.

P.S Sorry for late review.

Well, this got VERY complicated.

Zzzzz

I feel like the old guy is going to be the bad guy, but whatever. Anyway I enjoyed the chapter, and hope to see another one one soon. Don't really have much to say since not much happened.

This was a mysterious chapter.
Natsu senses are very good.
I wonder if the other Dragon Slayers had the same senses as Natsu.

Good work. Till the new chapter.

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Couldn't resist reading chapter 7 after 6 .
Wow you're balancing Mira and Erza so perfectly its astonishing.
Natsu's gobbling habit lol Mira's reaction was very likely to be just that after all she is an S class mage at that time.
I have to tell this but in love triangles mostly one character is absolute manipulative bitch and the other character a sweet heart so we always know who the winner is but this fic has you doubting who to side with.
Love it thanks for an awesome fic.
Take your time to update we'll be reading it anyways

One moment I love Mira the next moment she acts like a vixen. Oh well I agree her transition into a sweetie should take time :)

Erza's is cleaning Natsus house and Mira is at the memorial seems like no one won the first round as of now:)

Plainly put Mira was so bossy in this chapter maybe the she-devil side is taking over.
So a competition between Erza and Mira to win Natsu interesting I'm rooting for Erza already ( even though I ship Jerza) but Mira's conflicted emotions are heartrending its making it difficult to take sides.