I would like to apologize for my previous comment comparing you to someone was wrong of me and now being a story writer myself on wattpad I wouldn't want anyone to compare me to someone else I'm realize my mistake and I whole hearty apologize

oh snap, the update chapter has been removed. I sense good things to come.

anyway, I'd just like to say that between Calem and Serena, I'm probably in the minority who like Serena more than Calem as a protagonist. sure she isn't giving off that mysterious and kinda edgy vipe Calem, Nate, and Dawn are, but is instead alot more down to earth and realistic. and I like that. being more realistic means she's more relatable, which allows the reader to connect with Sharena more easily than they could the other protagonists. it's reasons similiar to these that make Hilbert my favorite protag of your Pokeverse, and Sharena because of her realistic and relatable character, had the potential to take that spot. looking forward to Future chapters

Just a heads up that the following part of the Content Guidelines is broken, despite the wonderful writing quality that your story has in terms of spelling and grammar before this chapter:

"The chapter system is not to be used as placeholder for non-story content such as author notes. You can add short author notes to the beginning or at the end of stories but never as individual chapters."

You're better off putting the contents of this chapter on your profile or as an author's note within a chapter that has story content.

Please do take out time to update this one too

Wow between you and Amy when it comes to writing stories i have to go with you mostly because you let the readers know when a story gonna take awhile to get back to and actually reply to the comments also don't take forever to get back to the story as soon as it got interesting while y'all both good writers in y'all own sense you probably better when it come to timing and stuff like that

No problem! Take as much time as you need! I’ll be waiting patiently for your return until then. Good luck with your other project!

I need more!

But in all seriousness, I like where this is going. To be completely honest, I prefer male protags more than female, and not in a sexist way. But despite this fic having a female protagonist, it makes me want to read more, and in a good way. I'm really looking forward to seeing how the rest of her journey unfolds. I'm also interested in how Calem is characterized. It's definitely different than how I imagined him, and I like it a lot. Can't wait for more! Good luck with the rest of the fanfic!

Hmm...okay.

X and Y weren't really the best out of all the Pokemon games...they were kinda forgettable and the battles were too easy...yet you take what it's got and made it work. This story is actually getting real good.

...I'm also pretty sure Calem will get Salamence anyway, and Serena will get Absol. Or is it the other way around? Only time will tell.

Regardless, I'm looking forward to what happens next.

- I. M. Poik

P. S. Was Shauna's Drifloon's nickname supposed to be a FNaF reference?

Will serena meet dawn some time?

So you not work on crossing fates yes or no?

If 'Colour of Your Soul' is anything to base on what to expect from this, I have a feeling this'll be pretty good.

I wish you would do a little world building like outside what the game tells you. And little info on how the whole League and Pokemon journey work. Like we always talk about it but do we ever really think about how it would work in a real functioning world?

Nice chapter, thanks for the update. I can't wait for the next one.

I love your stories.

Nice chapter and look like calem becomes a little soften