Great story, one of my favorites hope you update soon.

This is a really fun story! I had a blast reading this, you've made Naruto into a really cool character while still staying mostly true to who he is in his own series.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON! (_)

More please

Great work I hope you continue

Fcking BS. i read this one because of the no Harem tag and you just have to introduce another btch to Naruto.

I’m pretty sure Kurama is already out, that’s why he is capable of Biju Mode, or are you talking about actually releasing him, I’m pretty sure that will kill him.

The fact he mentioned that Naruto had a greater amount than Cali, I hope that’s because he had depleted a lot of chakra, because if not, I call bullshit, Naruto is a Low-Planetary level, which means, AT THE MINIMUM, at the Top Ten List, since apparently only something like ooh is it great red can destroy a planet

I am just gonna up and say it this writing is subpar in almost everything but grammar. I think that your worst problem is your dialogue and how you tend to dump exposition by the truckload for no reason at all. This coupled with your bland descriptions makes this feel like I am reading some person's rough-draft that they wrote while drunk.

Please update when you have the chance

Naruto instructed the Uzumaki

Nuff said

How my supposed to react to all of this?! Just stand here and take it, whenever I see people in pain it hurts me.
This is sooooooooooo, stupid. He gets mad over such things that it's so exaggerated. And he says, whenever I SEE people in pain, WTF? ITS just a story!
Fucking hell.
Ur Naruto is way too naive, and where was the abuse of the goddess, Izanami WENT down to Yomi! That's love and affection!

You are making out Naruto to be the stereotypical "I'm the hero of Justice, and I get all the girls because they get ABUSED! By the evil villains"

lol

hmm why make Sun an ass? From what I remember in Canon he was willing to help Issei and his group against the Khaos Brigade in I believe it was Kyoto

lmao Naruto is going to end up kicking Azazel's ass when he finds out about this experiment

So, just want to throw out that by the end of the 4th war, Naruto is so far beyond ultimate class that Sirzechs would be a joke to him. Speed alone has his reaction time at lightspeed and ONE shadow clone beat the 3rd raikage...and did other shit. If you want proof, go watch swagkage or seththeprogramer on youtube, or read a data book. Its stuff like this, the clear lack of understanding of a fandom, that kills stories like this shitheap for me