Too bad Eilwood isn't there

I really love this story and hope it continues soon

"Thanks for reminding me, Damn Philia!"

The editor in me both cringes and laughs at this. Quite the break in character, which I find hella amusing.

Whew. I thought it was going to go all civil war with FE6 vs 2nd gen. Glad to see that laurent has some sense at least.

Robin and Lyn seem so natural in this story, I love it. This is one of my favorites, I've read so many Robin x Lucina stories that it's getting dull. Good to see someone taking another route and shaking things up, and doing it very well if I may be so bold. I am very interested to see the true reasons behind Roy and co. showing up, but I guess that will have to wait! I look forward to the next update.

Ever gonna update Carrots and Rabbits again?

You paint a very beautiful picture of the great outdoor while writing the perspective from Robin and Lyndis. It really helps sell their lifestyle choice in Roy’s timeline and in a way is good characterization for the newlyweds. Speaking of which, them discussing where to live was also handled very well. Loved Robin being the so encouraging for Lyndis to be the first Female Chieftain. Not to mention Hanon The Legendary Hero who founded Sacae was female two (though translation errors make it so this isn’t well known), though depending on how you write the story that fact might be lost to history.

Fae certainly made a cute first impression. “Maddy got married!?” got quite a few chuckles out of me because I could picture her shock so well. Though I got to say I’m curious to find out exactly how long Fae has been on her own out in those woods. It would be heartbreaking if it was too long.

Was glad to see the parlay go peacefully. I have to ask, was the “sword and shield” by any chance referencing “The Rising of the Shield Hero” that started airing recently? I’ve been hearing people say the heroes look like the come out of Fire Emblem, the MC certainly looks similar to Mark once he gets a green cape. Saw someone in a comment section compare it to an alt world version of radiant dawn, which is appropriate considering their going to be dealing with some dark and heavy subject matter that reminds me of the history of Tellius. If you enjoyed the Tellius you might like it as well. (It’s getting the Goblin slayer treatment at the moment but manga is highly rated, and written by women years before #MeTwo started, so you might want to view the first few episodes yourself and form your own opinion of it before listening to any left leaning critics, though there’s a few of them who enjoy it as well)

The fact that Lyndis and Robin were able to hear Madelyn’s over emotional thoughts before seeing her was a good way to clue them in on who she was when she finally appeared. A very heart whelming reunion two. Loved it and I’m hoping to be able to read more.

I’m so glad you’re updating this story again!

Still can’t tell for sure if Niore is aware of her heritage or not with how you wrote this but I’m leaning towards she doesn’t as opposed to what you once mentioned in you end notes once.

So in Niore’s timeline Validar had set Tharja up to bear Robin’s kids for a sinister purpose. It would explain why that version of Robin never married, and to his knowledge, never had kids with Tharja despite how taken he was with her judging by his journal entries. Future Tharja would likely think it would be safest for Niore to never learn that her father was Robin if Validar was counting on his union to Tharja to produce an ideal child for his schemes. Some of the more horrible things future Tharja did to Niore could also then be seen as future Tharja scaring Niore away from the use of Dark Magic to further conceal her true heritage.

Very enjoyable chapter. Lyn can be pretty crafty when she needs to if she can arrange something without the super tactician noticing that something's off :P

She is wonderfully supportive wife, but knows where to draw the line and drag Robin away from work.

Fae was adorable blob of moe, despite being older than most characters in the series, but it seems to be common thing for manaketes, like Tiki, Kana or Nowi and Nah.

Glad that Laurent was mature enough to come and negotiate before the two camps of future kids devolved into pointless drama (you know, like all the Birthright and Conquest drama and bloodshed in Fates that could have been avoided if they went to the Bottomless Canyon like in Revelation?).

Also that scene with Mady was both heartwarming and made me curious what actually happened in her timeline to make her that glad to meet her parents. I mean even Lucina wasn't that outgoing about meeting Chrom again.

Actually, I'm curious about Elibe kids future in general and if the changes there affected the future of Valm kids. I'll gladly read the new chapter, though I'll try to be patient, since you said the next one won't be coming in a while.

For a chapter a whole lot of nothing happened, but at the same time a lot of things happened. Lyn deserves some good props for being such a great wife, asking people to do some of her husbands work and getting him away from the office, good one on you Lyn.
That talk about home was a needed one theirs no clear cut answer but I'm leaning them to go to Elible and rebuild the Lorca tribe. Lyn's right about Robin needing a break, even flat out leaving the military life. Going through so many wars in one lifetime isn't healthy, then theirs dealing with the nobles and we all know how that's going to go. I say screw all that Robin deserves some personal happiness!
That moment with Fae was just so cute. It made me think this is what Lyn and Robin would do everyday with Mady, Marc and Morgan when they were kids. I hope Mady tells her parents the truth as to why she and her friends are here. Lyn has openly stated Saceans don't lie, and I'm willing to bet she drilled those culture values into her kids. Besides the more info. Robin has to work with the better off they'll be. I also like that Mady's has her dad's armor, apart of me was afraid that the twins would be the apple in their dad's eye and he inadvertently ignore her (you haven't implied that, but I was afraid that would happen).
I almost forgot are you going to add Echoes lore into the story? It makes Grima very interesting. That's all I got hope it helps.

Still around... and looking good (this chapter i mean).
I saw one or two misspellings, but overall, this was a very good chapter. I especially love the ending, when Madelyn are reunited with her parents (even though they are the younger versions).

Love it, and looking forward to the next chapter.

I don't acrually like the nickname of Madelyn, if the nickname of Lyndis is 'Lyn' then they should call the daughter 'Made' XD. So they can also say "Made in Sacae" XD. Of course I'm joking. Her nickname is good but I could see Lyn and her family ruiling on Caelin as the Marquese's family.

I don't know why Fanfiction didn't showed my previous comment... Oh well, I'll try to remember and write it here:

First of all: WELCOME BACK MI AMIGOOOOOOO! I HOPE YOU HAD SOME FELIZ NAVIDAD AND NEW YEARS (two or three if I'm not wrong). You kept all of us with bated breath for more than two years XD. And now you're back! It's too much good reading again your story to think about all the time I had to wait XD. OK, like I wrote up, I'll place here the comment for the previous chapter and the one for this one:

Close to the end, you forgot a little "M" in them. When Noire considers that they never travel alone. OK, it was a little surprise to find a "Noire's Chpater" after so long but tis' still good. So Noire has white hairs. And people bully her for that?! Who is she, Hinata with the Byakugan?! [DO you took inspiration by that fact, by the way?] So... I think she has some kind of diary from Future Robin BUT I think he's not her father... right? I-I mean... I think this after reading what Robin wrote, I don't know if you're just playing with us or if Noire just misunderstood what Robin wanted to write. For a moment I thought she was going to be mad when she remembered him with Lyn and instead... no rage. OK... surely you returned in scene with your personal style XD, we were expecting a "Family Reunion" and instead you returned on the scene with a introspective chapter. Good, still good! Last thing: I'm starting to wonder HOW MUCH HOURS at day you dedicate to this story, if you write and rewrite something surely your "dedication" is pretty high.

[PS: I saw your answer to that Anonymous comment, I saw his/her comment and I saw it's about a possible confrontation between Robin, Lyn and Tharja about her hex... so, if you don't placed it on THIS chapter... is really going to happen in THAT way XD? And I still WANT to know what Lyn whispered to Tharja!]

OK, now I'll read THIS chapter and then place a comment...

I'll write things little by little reading or I'llmiss things. Lyn is a beech marten with Robin's dutiescompared to him XD, you wrote Phila wrong. You wrote PhilIa. Surely the couple is VERY nervous. Even if putting Tharja and her hexs in the middle was fun XD. For a moment I thought Lyn wanted to be sure to have a child XD. I lost the departure of Virion... when that happened? AWWWWW... they're soooo cute calling with surnames... my love, dear, sweetie... I see Lyn sometimes forgets about Robin's past. And she's not completely right about remaining in Caelin, she started her travel searching for Robin. No matter if she was still the Marquise or not but Robin is very cute when he wants with his wife. And THAT idea is not bad indeed! They could join Rath and the Kutolah! Two people are too much few to REbuilt a clan but joining another is still a good compromise and, if the OLD Lorca were old-fascioned, maybe the NEW Lorca will follow a woman with no problem XD.

AAAHHHH! I KNOW I'LL FIND OUT SOON BUT THE ONE THAT BUMPED ON LYN IS FAE?!

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I KNEW IT, IT WAS FAE!

But... wait a sec! They have met Fae in FE7 when you visit Hawkeye's house! They should remember her like all the other people of Elibe! and Fae... is Fae, it's... stupidly cute or cutely stupid XD.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! For the butterfly you used a quote of her from Heroes XD.

[in a threatening way] Tatatatatataaaaaaa... is Laurent appeared? And, right when he's going to talk... someone HAS to interrupt! DAMN! ALWAYS AT THE RIGHT MOMENT! And the new guy is Roy! I wonder how much people will show before HER will enter in the scene...

And is cool how Lyn is able to straighten up Roy XD. Surely Laurent is not a guy that knows WHAT to say and in WHAT way to say. Now, like before I'll see soon, I imagine the surprise of the couple. But what was that "Un"?

And we have Guinivere as well, who's the next? The children of Hector... [And Laurent was in the past for all that time?! WOOOOOW!]

AWWWWwwwwwww... another cute moment between Lyn and Robin... and the doors are opening again... THIS TIME is who I think is?

In the end you closed it with a GREAT and sweet BANG! Almost litke the chapter where Lyn accepts Robin's proposal. I saw something of their first meet in Feroxi as well: thoughts moving fast, mouths opens, words not going out, hands stretched. Here you added the fall of the little one. And the final hug! I loved the chapter BUT I MADLY loved the conclusion.

OK, I know I wrote a lot of useless or stupid things but I wanted to write EVERYTHING. And, in the end and like I wrote before, the couple is REALLY thinking about retuning to Sacae. And, after the last revelations, I think you'll make them return to THEIR home. And now I'll wait for the next one. If they moved in this way seeing Madelyn, I wonder what their reaction will be when they'll discover about the other two guys... But... don't you think they'll be late for the date with the "returning party" XD?

OK, after this avalanche of words, I hope the site will show my LOOOOOOOOONG comment and I greet you again! It's good to see you again and... HOLA AMIGO!

Well, after reading everything up until this point, here comes my rewiew. Grab the chair, get comfy and just enjoy my commentary; excusing my possible mistakes, because english is not my native lenguage. Done the disclaimer, here we GO.

First of all, allow me to congratulate you on surprising me. You took an idea and opened a WHOLE NEW WORLD on somenthing already closed. This deserves praise, as it made me stay and read from start to finish.

Second, your take on future children, making them warring factions (at the moment) is a logical and wonderful choice, that opens new interactions and paths on the story, and let us Wonder what is going to happen.

Not all is good on my opinion however, as some scene breaks totally BREAK the Flow of the story (If I remember... The explanation of where Roy and his crew stay... ImO), But thats your style and is how you do it, so is minor incovenience.

I also think Tharja is, maybe, too subdued in his relationship with Robin in exchange of how it was at the start. You should explore that, whether to explain it or make it as the y were growing apart and then make them grow closer.

Said all that, keep the good work, you truly make me enjoy reading this story and await the next chapter.

With impatience, Platino.

Love the chapter, got tears in me eyes during that last bit, will Roy and the gang tell robin and lyn on what happens in their timeline or will they leave it out. On top of that how does this event affect the rest of the groups?