Ahh! THE FEELS! YOU KILLED ME!

Actually though, good job. Very rarely do people succeed at making me cry.

Oh, that was awesome! I was glad to see it took a while for Merlin to overcome his own betrayal and forgive Arthur. Sometimes it seems to happen too quickly in some of these stories. It was a devastating betrayal and it would take time to heal, even for someone as kind hearted as Merlin. Great story!

Wow...That was ...amazing. I teared up in parts of it. I mean...Wow. Great job!

Please write a sequel, this is fantastic!

Excellent. The lines from memories haunting people were very persuasive and well executed.

Well written, but I don't like the ones where Arthur is cruel to Merlin, even if it does end well. But you're a good writer, with a wide range of abilities. Thank you.

wow just wow! I never would have imagined this type of writing from my sister. This story was so sentimental and drew me in. I loved it. The bond between arthur and merlin couldn't have been shown more pronouncedly in any episode.

That made me cry. It was amazing!

The emotions! *Smiles*

Thank you again for posting... Although, this did give me a poem idea, maybe I'll write it out later - so thank you for that as well, *Grin*

Fictional characters should not be able to make you cry!

I am pre sure I have read this same same story before, but I read it ages ago so yer lol. Well It was great good-luck on future stories :D

Very well written but I think Merlin must be superhuman to recover that quickly! What happened to change the Prats mind?

Thank god for a happy ending god know Arthur knows how to fuck things up big time.