I think this is the 5th time I've read this... well, I can't blame myself.

Oh my god, this is the best fanfic everrrrrrrrr! Thank you for taking the time to write this, it's my new favorite fanfic! I'm definitely making fanart.

I just discovered your story, 4 years late! But I’m so glad I did. It’s fun, impossible yet packed with as much bendable logic as you have allowed it, and I find myself rooting for the odd couple. Kudos to your writing and vivid imagination! ...in the end note you mentioned wrapping it up in a handful of chapters, and there’s 22 more to go :) funny how that turned out.

Love it! Are you still planning the sequel?

Beautiful and perfect from start to finish.
Congratulation..!

Ho.. this was a tsunami of emotions, very moving.
Made me cry. This story is excellent.

OMG...
This chapter was lovely.
I was excited T.T
What Iam reading this fic has haunted me.

Enjoyed your story. Thank you for writing. :)

i like

I like the story but I feel like pro-abortion views aren't being expressed properly or accurately. I know that the characters' views don't necessarily reflect the authors views and that the child is (probably) important to the plot, but I feel like the repercussions not having an abortion are a bit downplayed here just in terms of Kakashi's character. Kakashi has a fuck ton of issues, let's not lie to ourselves, parental/paternal issues especially, but I don't feel like that shows up enough. Why isn't Kakashi reflecting over his drunk dad? Or having self-esteem issues about how shitty he thinks he will be as parent? I mean, he's a murderer. He probably has enough guilt to fill the entire Atlantic ocean. It'd be cool if you had a paragraph or two of him considering all that, even ifhe wants to keep the kid in the end. Who knows, maybe that's included later. Just thought I'd say it anyways.

I MUST HAVE MORE! great story

best line ever "you know shit!" haha too funny

hah nice

awwww

oh thats a relief