I’m really loving this story, I just wish Hikari had a bit more of a backbone, you know? And she gets into the same mess Nina did, I was hoping she would have a bit more sense lol. But I really like the story!

OMG Your story is amazing. I have never read a fanfic that puts such detail in the characters development. It’s suttle but you can gradually see how every character changes and grows. They all have their quirks and even outside the plot you capture their characters personalities. You do the story justice by not changing the plot too much but change it enough to make it new. I can’t wait for the next update and hope you do it soon. :)

Continuing to do very well, I am impressed _ I applaud your loyalty to the story, three years now and you've written double a novels worth. I can hardly keep up my stories for a year, I lack the consistency. I see there's been a turn of events, and that the characters are bonding even more than before. I like it, keep up the good work

Oh good four chapters. Yes I like this story.

I enjoy this writing style, dear Kari. I plan to give detailed reviews on each chapter after this point when I read more of the story. Good job.

When you like Hikari more than Nina but that isn't any of my business * sipping tea *

I love this one as well as all the others it's funny I only read your fanFiction. But I love how you put your story into words, when I read it it's like a movie going off in my head the detail you put into is amazing. Please keep up the great work.

Nice two chapters

This chapter felt different, in a way. I think it's because you are beginning to mature in you writing. I know that showering you with praise in my previous reviews made it seem like I was making things sugar-coating and sickly sweet. But that's not how it is at all. I truly mean what I say...buuuttt, to make things fair, there can only be only thing I can complain about. Ironic thing is, it's something I complimented you on. Your descriptivenes. While it is a wonderful and amazing quality to have in writing, sometimes you over due it just a little. It doesn't ruin your writing or anything, but sometimes can be a bit much and can make me forget the original topic. It's not that bad though. If you shorten that descriptivenes by just a tiny bit, only a tiny bit, than it'll make your chapters shorter so that you can have more room to expand your ideas, and it can also be more appealing towards readers who only want to recieve the idea in general. Though you don't have to change it if you don't want to. After all, your writing style defines you as a person. If taking my suggestion into account changes the way you portray words, then I'd rather you not. After all, it's only my opinion. Stick with what you want, because your writing has a lot of amazing qualities.

This was another wonderful chapter, and I just can't get enough of Icchi and Hikari fluffiness, it's way too adorable. And then Zero's attempt at cooking...just imagining that makes me laugh. A pouting Zero is way too funny. Also, I forgot to mention in my previous review, I just love how you call Zero "bluenette", it's adorable.

I know I haven't been reading your story a lot lately, but I'm going to change that. From now on, I will be your most loyal reviewer! Get ready for more of these lengthy reviews! Keep up the good work!

Icchi and Hikara fluffy stuff! Yay, super cute! Though it sucks that Icchi got sick, it really doesn't suit him, it's hard to imagine.

Another well-written chapter, good work! The ending was really touching, that was a perfect conclusion leaving the reader to think even after already finishing the chapter. It's another amazing quality you have as a writer! It left me thinking, that's for sure. The bond you create with others is far more precious than what a simple liquid may hold...that was just too beautiful! Not only are you an amazing writer, your also poetic!

I have to admit I was surprised when Icchi lunged at Hikari like that. For a moment, I thought he might've had a similar dream to Hikari's, but I threw that thought out the window. Since...Icchi was pretty messed up. Maybe it has something to do with his past? If I recall from the anime, he had once acted like a jerk to Zero, right? Ah, I'm overthinking it.

Great chapter again, this one really got me. And nice fluffiness with Hikari and Zero, but we need some more Icchi in this!

Good job~

Awesome chapter~~~~the way you portrayed amazing imagery in your writing was just so perfect. I love that strength you have when it comes to being descriptive. It's something I'm so horribly lacking in my stories.

Anyways, I really loved the situation between Zero and Hikari, it was super cute. Writing it was tricky, but you managed to not only avoid writing anything cringy, but actually made it so beautifully written and so interesting. A job well done!

Gah I finally read it!
Sooooooooooooooo cuuuuutttteeee! You tease! Why didn't they kiss? Ahhhhh...the suspense almost killed me. This was an awesome chapter!

Good five chapters.

Amazing as always. And who's this Hiro character!? I hope we get more of a background story on him and hikari. Keep up the good work :)