You changed the story what about the snow queen

report review for abusejohnd876 chapter 66 . Oct 10, 2018
Farquaad: (Holds his hand up to stop) That's enough. He's ready to talk.
(Gingh starts coughing)
Farquaad: (Laughing) (Clears Throat) (Grabs Gingy's broken off legs) Run, run, run, as fast as you can. You can't catch me. I'm the gingerbread man!
Gingy: You're a monster.
Farquaad: (Slams the table) I'm not the monster here. You are. You and the rest of that fairy tale trash, poisoning my perfect world. Now, tell me! Where are the others?
Gingy: Eat me! (Spits on Lord Farquaad)
(Grunts)
Farquaad: I've tried to be fair to you creatures. Now my patience has reached its end! Tell me or I'll... (Reaches for...)
Gingy: No, no, not the buttons. Not my gumdrop buttons.
Farquaad: All right then. Who's hiding them? TELL ME!
Gingy: Okay, I'll tell you. Do you know the muffin man?
Farquaad: The muffin man?
Gingy: The muffin man.
Farquaad: Yes, I know the muffin man, who lives on Drury Lane?
Gingy: Well, she's married to the muffin man.
Farquaad: The muffin man?
Gingy: The muffin man!
Farquaad: She's married to the muffin man.
(Door Opens)
Captain: My lord! We found it.
Farquaad: Then what are you waiting for? Bring it in.
(Man grunting while trying to bring a big object down stairs)
(One of the guards then removes the sheet covering the object which is revealed the be the magic mirror of the evil queen)
(Gasping in amazement)
Gingy: Oh!
Farquaad: Magic Mirror...
Gingy: Don't tell him anything! No! (Gingerbread Man Whimpers)
Farquaad: Evening. Mirror, mirror, on the wall. Is this not the most perfect kingdom of them all?
Mirror: Well, technically you're not a king.
Farquaad: Uh, Thelonius. (Thelonius holds up a handheld mirror and punches the glass which breaks) You were saying?
Mirror: What I mean is, you're not a king yet. But you can become one. All you have to do is marry a princess.
Farquaad: Go on.
Mirror: (Chuckles) So, just sit back and relax, my lord, because it's time for you to meet today's eligible bachelorettes. And here they are! Bachelorette number one is a mentally abused shut-in from a kingdom far, far away. She likes sushi and hot tubbing anytime. Her hobbies include cooking and cleaning for her two evil sisters. Please welcome Cinderella. Bachelorette number two is a cape-wearing girl from the land of fancy. Although she lives with seven other men, she's not easy. Just kiss her dead, frozen lips and find out what a live wire she is. Come on. Give it up for Snow White! And last, but certainly not the least, bachelorette number three is a fiery redhead, from a dragon-guarded castle surrounded by hot boiling lava! But don't let that cool you off. She's a loaded pistol who likes piña coladas and getting caught in the rain. Yours for the rescuing, Princess Fiona! So will it be, bachelorette number one, bachelorette number two or bachelorette number three?
Guards: Two! Two! Three! Three! Two! Two! Three!
Farquaad: Three? One? (Shudders) Three?
Thelonius: Three! Pick number three, my lord!
Farquaad: Okay, okay, uh, number three!
Mirror: Lord Farquaad, you've chosen Princess Fiona.
(Escape By Rupert Holmes Playing)
Rupert Holmes: If you like piña coladas. And getting caught in the rain.
Farquaad: Princess Fiona.
Rupert Holmes: If you're not into yoga.
Farquaad: She's perfect. All I have to do is just find someone who can go...
Mirror: But I probably should mention the little thing that happens at night.
Farquaad: I'll do it.
Mirror: Yes, but after sunset.
Farquaad: Silence! I will make this Princess Fiona my queen, and Duloc will finally have the perfect king! Captain, assemble your finest men. We're going to have a tournament.

Jack Sparrow: My compass is unique.
Norrington: *Unique* here having the meaning of *broken*?
Jack Sparrow: True enough. This compass does not point north."
Elizabeth Swann: ...Where does it point?"
Jack Sparrow: It points to the thing you want most in this world.

I think it would have been funny if Gold actually his former self when he looked in the same direction that Travis did.

Grumpy: That's a lot of money. If this Joker guy was so smart, he'd have had us bring a bigger car.
(Promptly draws his gun and points it a Bozo)
Grumpy: I'm bettin' the Joker told you to kill me as soon as we loaded the cash.
Bozo: (Looks at his watch, checking it. He sighs) No, no no no. I kill the bus driver.
Grumpy: (as Bozo moves a few paces to one side) Bus driver? What bus driver?
(A yellow school bus reverses through the bank's doors and knocks Grumpy down. The driver jumps out)
Bus Driver: School's out! Time to go!
(Laughs)
Bus Driver: Cat's not gettin' up, is he?
(Loading duffels)
Bus Driver: That's a lot of money. What happened to the rest of the guys?
(Bozo casually shoots the bus driver dead, then picks up the last duffel and throws it into the bus. Bozo prepares to climb in)
Gotham National Bank Manager: Think you're smart, huh? The guy that hired youze, he'll just do the same to you. Oh, criminals in this town used to believe in things. Honor. Respect. Look at you! What do you believe in, huh? WHAT DO YOU BELIEVE IN?
Bozo: (Putting a gas grenade in the banker's mouth) I believe, whatever doesn't kill you, simply makes you...
(Takes off his mask revealing the face of the Joker)
The Joker: ...stranger.

Poor Unfortunate Souls Lyrics

URSULA
The only way to get what you want is to become a human yourself.

ARIEL
Can you do that?

URSULA
My dear, sweet child. That's what I do. It's what I live for.
To help unfortunate merfolk like yourself.
Poor souls with no one else to turn to.
I admit that in the past I've been a nasty
They weren't kidding when they called me, well, a witch
But you'll find that nowadays
I've mended all my ways
Repented, seen the light, and made a switch to this.

And I fortunately know a little magic
It's a talent that I always have possessed
And here lately, please don't laugh
I use it on behalf
Of the miserable, lonely, and depressed pathetic

Poor unfortunate souls
In pain, in need
This one longing to be thinner
That one wants to get the girl
And do I help them?
Yes, indeed
Those poor unfortunate souls
So sad, so true
They come flocking to my cauldron
Crying, "Spells, Ursula, please!"
And I help them!
Yes I do

Now it's happened once or twice
Someone couldn't pay the price
And I'm afraid I had to rake 'em 'cross the coals
Yes I've had the odd complaint
But on the whole I've been a saint
To those poor unfortunate souls
Have we got a deal?

ARIEL
If I become human, I'll never be with my father or sisters again.

URSULA
But you'll have your man, heh heh. Life's full of tough choices, isn't it? Heh heh.
Oh, and there is one more thing.
We haven't discussed the subject of payment.

ARIEL
But I don't have...

URSULA
I'm not asking much, just a token really, a trifle!
What I want from you is... your voice.

ARIEL
But without my voice, how can I...

URSULA
You have your looks, your pretty face.
And don't underestimate the importance of body language, ha!
The men up there don't like a lot of blabber
They think a girl who gossips is a bore!
Yes on land it's much preferred for ladies not to say a word
And after all dear, what is idle prattle for?
Come on, they're not all that impressed with conversation
True gentlemen avoid it when they can
But they dote and swoon and fawn
On a lady who's withdrawn
It's she who holds her tongue who get's a man
Come on you poor unfortunate soul
Go ahead!
Make your choice!

I'm a very busy woman and I haven't got all day
It won't cost much
Just your voice!
You poor unfortunate soul
It's sad but true
If you want to cross the bridge, my sweet
You've got the pay the toll
Take a gulp and take a breath
And go ahead and sign the scroll
Flotsam, Jetsam, now I've got her, boys
The boss is on a roll
This poor unfortunate soul

Beluga sevruga
Come winds of the Caspian Sea
Larengix glaucitis
Et max laryngitis
La voce to me

Now, sing!

ARIEL
Aah...
URSULA
Keep singing!

Farquaad: (Holds his hand up to stop) That's enough. He's ready to talk.
(Gingh starts coughing)
Farquaad: (Laughing) (Clears Throat) (Grabs Gingy's broken off legs) Run, run, run, as fast as you can. You can't catch me. I'm the gingerbread man!
Gingy: You're a monster.
Farquaad: (Slams the table) I'm not the monster here. You are. You and the rest of that fairy tale trash, poisoning my perfect world. Now, tell me! Where are the others?
Gingy: Eat me! (Spits on Lord Farquaad)
(Grunts)
Farquaad: I've tried to be fair to you creatures. Now my patience has reached its end! Tell me or I'll... (Reaches for...)
Gingy: No, no, not the buttons. Not my gumdrop buttons.
Farquaad: All right then. Who's hiding them? TELL ME!
Gingy: Okay, I'll tell you. Do you know the muffin man?
Farquaad: The muffin man?
Gingy: The muffin man.
Farquaad: Yes, I know the muffin man, who lives on Drury Lane?
Gingy: Well, she's married to the muffin man.
Farquaad: The muffin man?
Gingy: The muffin man!
Farquaad: She's married to the muffin man.
(Door Opens)
Captain: My lord! We found it.
Farquaad: Then what are you waiting for? Bring it in.
(Man Grunting)
(Gasping)
Gingy: Oh!
Farquaad: Magic Mirror...
Gingy: Don't tell him anything! No! (Gingerbread Man Whimpers)
Farquaad: Evening. Mirror, mirror, on the wall. Is this not the most perfect king of all?
Mirror: Well, technically you're not a king.
Farquaad: Uh, Thelonius. You were saying?
Mirror: What I mean is, you're not a king yet. But you can become one. All you have to do is marry a princess.
Farquaad: Go on.
Mirror: (Chuckles) So, just sit back and relax, my lord, because it's time for you to meet today's eligible bachelorettes. And here they are! Bachelorette number one is a mentally abused shut-in from a kingdom far, far away. She likes sushi and hot tubbing anytime. Her hobbies include cooking and cleaning for her two evil sisters. Please welcome Cinderella. Bachelorette number two is a cape-wearing girl from the land of fancy. Although she lives with seven other men, she's not easy. Just kiss her dead, frozen lips and find out what a live wire she is. Come on. Give it up for Snow White! And last, but certainly not the least, bachelorette number three is a fiery redhead, from a dragon-guarded castle surrounded by hot boiling lava! But don't let that cool you off. She's a loaded pistol who likes piña coladas and getting caught in the rain. Yours for the rescuing, Princess Fiona! So will it be, bachelorette number one, bachelorette number two or bachelorette number three?
Guards: Two! Two! Three! Three! Two! Two! Three!
Farquaad: Three? One? (Shudders) Three?
Thelonius: Three! Pick number three, my lord!
Farquaad: Okay, okay, uh, number three!
Mirror: Lord Farquaad, you've chosen Princess Fiona.
( Escape By Rupert Holmes Playing )
Rupert Holmes: If you like piña coladas. And getting caught in the rain.
Farquaad: Princess Fiona.
Rupert Holmes: If you're not into yoga.
Farquaad: She's perfect. All I have to do is just find someone who can go...
Mirror: But I probably should mention the little thing that happens at night.
Farquaad: I'll do it.
Mirror: Yes, but after sunset.
Farquaad: Silence! I will make this Princess Fiona my queen, and Duloc will finally have the perfect king! Captain, assemble your finest men. We're going to have a tournament.

This is pure curiosity, but why did you have Travis take Elsa’s last name?

I wanna see the Snow and Charming looking for Emma and Travis flashbacks pretty please.

Please can you edit this chapter and put in the Snow & David flashbacks when they search for Emma & Travis. Please?

I thought this chapter was great, but can you actually edit this chapter and put in the flashblacks for Snow and David when they're awake from the curse and looking for Emma and Travis? Pretty please?

Get started on Twice Upon a Time: The Next Chapter already plus show Annabelle and Ingrid.

From start to finish... mann that was long. And yet, still worth it. :D
Chapters 1 to 34 in one, 35 to 87 as posted, and I just finished 88 to 103 in one.
I have to say, I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I am very exited to see how you adapt S7 going forward. (Also, I like how your making henry's story in S7 a separate book. I really would have had trouble finding my place if you had kept it in one. That, and I personally feel that this story is long enough as it is...) :)

AAAHAHHAHAHAHA
INGRID AND ANNABELLE AS TEENS
CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT STORY

AWWWESOOOME HAHAHAHAHA HAAAAA!