I love how you portray Jones...This counts as stupid, just so you know.

I do believe that Jammie Dodgers come in packs last time I ate one.

Oh Oh MY GOD I'VE NEVER LAUGHED THIS MUCH EVER IN MY LIFE! AHAHAHHA

This was actually so beautiful

I really really love this and I wish you had made it into a multi chapter fic! That would've been awesome! I've read most of your other docs and I loved them all! Just one problem though. As a Yemeni female, I was a bit offended at that little part you added about the assassins but, whatever, at least everything else is awesome.

Hahahaha, this was epic!

Ha! I love that we got jones commentary slid into the scene. And ... Whatever biscuits those were.. Wot the heckles were they?! Never heard of them. Well... I am from new zealand. But still.. Ive heard of all sorts of british and american. Things. Just not those. Lol. Anyways, thankooo!

I love the last line the most it's so funny. please do write more stories

Fantastic~

Hi,
This is a really great, interesting and amazing story. I really enjoyed reading it. You did a fantastic job at writing it. Well done.
Are those men who were against Alex at the assembly his enemies from his last mission? Do you know what Semper Paratus mean?

That was genius :D

OMFG YES.

Disappointed when I realized it wasn't a follow-up on Semper Fi, but it more than made up for it in actual content. I've never seen the episode myself (not a Whovian) but I totally could see that happening, and this is iso/i something Alex would do. I could see AHorz writing it, almost.

"It was risky, Alex knew, [but he had to take it. I can't write that in AHorz's voice]

Alex held up the biscuit. 'See this? It's not a bullet you can dodge. It's a bomb detonator. Pull that trigger - well, you'll regret it more than I will,""

Or something like that.

Music camp? What's your instrument? I just started a Music Performance degree in trombone!

Brilliant, I can't stop laughing :)

Hahahahahahaha!

:D

Laugh out loud funny

Heeey there! You are alive! Thank goodness, I thought you were abducted by SCORPIA. Seriously, you got me worried for a moment there. haha, just kidding. Hope your music camp was good. What instrument do you play?
Anyway, I loved this one shot! It was really, really, really good. But then again, I haven't read any story of yours that isn't, so...
Hope to see more of you soon.
Quick question, you don't happen to have interest in writing slash fanfiction, do you? *blushes* *hides under the computer table* 'Cause, I mean, you're such an amazing writter and I bet you could make something awesome with that. (pairings wolf/alex, ben/alex, maybe? *O*)
But if that's not your cup of tea, don't worry. I still loooove you 3
Welcome back,
Kisses,
Bri.