I love you haha your the best author ;)

Yes, you're right. Jacob is the best virtual character ever but Bella didn't deserve him. I am so glad you didn't cut his hair.
This story is very well written, thank you!

You really were spot on with how Jacob and Bella were prephase. Bella never was able to just love Jacob and be happy, but I like how you made her have enough courage to finally show him how she felt. Now, I feel that they can last through everything. Kudos!

Ummm, I think I'll review,lol. This was fun to read; I liked how you included several of her high school friends within the story. Glad she finally took the initiative at the end and kissed him!

loved it :)

I liked this. It was sweet and fun, I agree with you that I think it would've been more interesting if she had chosen Jake.

Ok, so i got pressured into reviewing this ;-D
What i liked - erm, so the arguments between bella and Jacob were cool, believable which is something rare. And i like the detail in building up the background and explaining whetevand what was happening - it was enpigh to actually visualise in my mind as i read, which is cool too. Oh and i liked how sometimes there were poeces of the original words by SMayer worked in, made it something kore solid or realistic, for me anyway. And i liked Jacobs description of the charm bracelet, particularly the wolf and the sun and moon. All in all a thoroughly good read, i trust you plan on continuing/expanding it. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Loved the silly randomness at the end too, cheeky, like seeing the outtakes at the end of a movie ;-)