Just completed reading through the story as it is and it holds real potential.
It's believable: Tatsumi is ofc OOC, but other characters aren't, especially Esdese.
There's no discrepancies in power levels, the OCs are interesting.
The story is its own take on AgK universe, while maintaining a clear goal.
Also OP Tatsumi is great!

I can't be certain if you'll someday pick the story up again, but if you do, I hope my and other reviews will fuel that desire to continue.

Please tell me you don’t fuck their names up the whole time?

I love it, your plan for redeeming esdeath is great and I would really like to see were it goes, please update

This is an amazing story. I hope to see more

please just update it's been a couple of years.

This story is amazing please update

so it was from Seven Deadly Sins! Knew it!

At the Empire, the darkness sky was no longer active as the normal sky got rid of it. But Shadey was on top of the building, eating a bag of Tubby Toast, & waiting for Tatsumi to go active & go on an aggressive rampage.
Shadey: (giggles grimly) This, is going to be interesting. (throws a Tubby Toast into his mouth)
Tatsumi strangely got up & knock down the caution lines that are attached to cones as he walked like an unresponsive person in town.
Honest: (overhears the alarm) ESDEATH! YOU & YOUR JAEGERS OVER HERE NOW!
Esdeath, Kurome, Seryu, Wave, Run, Bols, & Dr. Stylish ran to meet Makoto & Honest.
Esdeath: What is it?
Makoto: The screen shown us that Tatsumi is scaring everybody while he is walking like a strange person in the town. You & your Jaegers need to stop him!
Esdeath: Don't worry. We will do anything to stop him & sort this out. (to the Jaegers) Ready for that?
Dr. Stylish, Bols, Run, Wave, Seryu, & Kurome: Roger that!
Tatsumi was still walking like a quiet person until Esdeath & her Jaegers came to stop him.
Run: Tatsumi, stop.
Bols: Don't worry Tatsumi, were here to fix you perfectly.
Shadey: (grins grimly) Oh really? How about you deal with this first? (snaps his fingers)
Due to Shadey's fingers snap, he summoned Ghost Girl, Kleve & Klave, Ice Cube, Spyn, Bardo, Sezera, Cryss, & Muzai right in front of Esdeath & her Jaegers.
Esdeath: (with a shadow expression) This is going to be interesting.
Wave: Let's do this!
As the battle began, Esdeath battles Ice Cube, Kurome battles Ghost Girl, Seryu battles Sezera & Muzai, Wave battles the Brute Tubbies, Run battles Bardo, Bols battles Spyn, & Dr. Stylish battles Cryss. Wave successfully went to Tatsumi by struggling pushing against the Brute Tubbies.
Shadey: Do you think that was easy? One more part... (grins evilly)
Tatsumi began to aggressively slap Wave's hand away as the Brutes pushed his weapon with their cleavers.
Wave: Tatsumi! What are you do~
Tatsumi ran to Wave & insanely choke him before punching him in the stomach, dropping him to the ground, kicking his right leg, & kicking his side, which rolls him away. Tatsumi began roar in madness due to his soul & mind being corrupted by Shadow Tubby.
Wave: Dang it! I knew Tatsumi was like this!
Tatsumi blindly fires the dark energy ray from his left arm while his arms in a T position at Wave, who was protected by Kurome, who fired purple & black lightning from her katana to rival the dark energy ray.
Kurome: I did the same thing that you care for me.
Wave: Thanks, Kurome. (to other Jaegers) ANY IDEAS ON HOW WE CAN STOP TATSUMI FROM BEING CORRUPTED!?
Esdeath: I don't. Anyone?
Seryu: Koro?
Koro has an idea.
Seryu: You wanna me to throw you at Tatsumi?
Koro nodded.
Seryu: Here goes nothing... (throws her Teigu to Tatsumi)
Koro successfully went into Tatsumi's body. He entered his body where the area is full of mental darkness. Koro land on Tatsumi before punching him, refreshing his memories completely. It also cleanse the darkness into a brightness scene.
Tatsumi: (opens his eye) Ugh~ What just happened? (notices somebody on top of him) Koro?
Koro was happy before licking Tatsumi's face.
Tatsumi: Thank you for saving me.
The scene cuts as Koro got out of Tatsumi's body.
Seryu: Koro, you did it!
Kurome: We successfully got Tatsumi back to normal!
Wave: Yo! Look who backs with us!
Tatsumi: Hey guys! I'm back from myself!
Shadey overhears as he was shocked about this.
Ghost Girl fires a gloomy projectile, The Brutes fire explosive spike trails, Spyn shoots a fireball, Bardo breathes sound waves, Ice Cube shoots an ice ball, Sezera fires a charm blast, Cryss breathes toxic gas, & Muzai fires electric shocks.
Esdeath: Tatsumi! LOOK OUT!
Tatsumi overhears this, summons his sword, & blocking all the attacks from the Cult Shadow members before killing them with the energy slash from the sword. Esdeath, Kurome, Seryu, Wave, Run, Bols, & Dr. Stylish cheers in victory as Tatsumi actually killed the monsters in one shot.
Shadey: (angry after his plan failed) Grrr... (transforms through a black smoke, turning his full body black, only his white smiling mouth & television stomach are visible; teleports behind Tatsumi.)
Esdeath & her Jaegers: TATSUMI! BEHIND YOU!
Tatsumi: Huh? (looks behind to see Shadow Tubby pound his hands on him, but he uses his sword to block it) YOU SEE!? I"M NO LONGER YOUR PUPPET!
Shadow Tubby: HOW DID YOU MANAGED TO TURN BACK TO NORMAL YOU BAKA!?
Shadow Tubby & Tatsumi continued their argument & fighting until Tatsumi pushed the dark teletubby with one kick.
Shadow Tubby: YOU FOOL! HOW MANY TIMES WILL YOU GET MY PLANS FOILED!? ESPECIALLY AFTER I CORRUPTED YOU WITH MY INNER DARKNESS RELEASE!
Tatsumi: NONSENSE! YOU DON'T DO THAT TO PEOPLE! EVER! I WILL BANISH YOUR EVIL RIGHT HERE & NOW! & YOU WILL BE WEAK!
Esdeath, Kurome, Seryu, Koro, Wave, Run, Bols, & Dr. Stylish overhears this & they made a choice to transfer their energies to Tatsumi, who charges his sword with full power before firing a huge yellow beam, which make Shadow Tubby exhale smog at the yellow blast, which easily pushes the smog.
Shadow Tubby: One day... I will destroy the... (yells in agony as he got hit by the yellow energy beam before exploding)
Esdeath & her Jaegers cheer for Tatsumi's victory once again as he hold him up & throw him up high.
Jaegers: Tatsumi! Tatsumi! Tatsumi! Tatsumi! Tatsumi!
THE END.

I suppose you abandoned this one, which is a shame, I'm actually enjoying how this is different. I've seen... Two stories where esdeath's character is "broken". Yours was by overpowering her and making her submissive while the other, was also a fight but with more talking and more convincing since her mindset is on survival of the fittest you can really twist her into anything you desire, be it break her little "logic" or make her be the weak one which I have not seen any fan fic do.
It was quite amusing to look for references in tatsumi's new character. I don't remember what chapter it was now since I read this all in a row, but I saw you copying Itachi from Naruto. Brought a smile to my face, finger gesture, clone breaks into crows, that as really amusing. If you stopped writing due to lack of ideas, I wouldn't be surprised. You didn't kill her, but you certainly broke her and tortured her, and she is sorta the only person in this universe who is actually a threat. Anyone who beats her, beats the Empire. Where would you go from there right? Raze the empire to the ground? Sure, hell you can even write it in one chapter, Tatsumi is powerful enough for it and esdeath is willing to abandon it for him, she has nothing else now. Unless you start inventing, I suppose you hit a wall where you can go with this... I'd hope you at least updated this with a chapter admitting this or just gave any sort of update in one chapter, if you just said it, it wouldn't even take five minutes. All in all, this story was a joy to read, very happy with it. As of writing this and seeing when it was lastly updated and thinking about any predictable futures in this fic, I now understand why you stopped. (Or maybe not, I did follow it to see more updates, I enjoyed this a lot after all.) If I was right on the money, I hope you come up with some interesting turn. I enjoy characters without purpose, wandering. They become strong and interesting. You could have this new Tatsumi vanish, even from his servants, with esdeath and use this for some character development in your universe, be it tatsumi's past or esdeath showing her affection. I didn't read the manga, but there are options here. This is your fanfiction, your world. You use the story's characters, their universe, but you aren't bound by it. Hell you can say the world is being attacked by turtles who breathe fire and blink at things aggressively. Since you reached the end I guess with the story, transform it, have fun. It's fiction for a reason.

Duude it's been 3 years... Updat!

Don't know about you but I absolutely love esdeath, as well as many other people. I mean how could you not love her

I really wish this continued

Says they won’t abandon this fanfic then they just abandon it:(

crows are my thing!

gi me da update! i'll bookmark it for another 2 year, than it's over if chap 11 doesn't come out.