The second half was a bit much, but I love the way John asked permission to kiss Sherlock.

Loved this!

Oh my God
this was so sweet and so kind of typicall
it was a really good story but to say all this in the Pub i couldnt stop laughing XD

OMG no why so beautiful
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Omigod, omigod, omigod! Fangirl attack! Why is this so sweet?! It's brilliant! Sherlock was brilliant in this!

Whaaaaat, I've never read anything so cute. Wonderfully written.

That was so cute

You make their love so cute and fluffy here and then in The Ballads story of yours, you make it so serious and meaningful and both of them just blow me away with how you do it! Everything just flows and there's humor too, it always makes me want to read more and more. Lovely writer you are :))

So so cute ;)))

A really nice story. A lot of fun at the beginning, with Sherlock's thoughts. Then, more fluffy, but still enjoyable. Add to my favorites, of course !

Ahhhhh johnlock fluff. My favourite. *squee*

That's a lot of practice, gahhh! You should tell your coach you have higher priorities, like, living! lol I don't know how you do everything you do, like your art too, which blows me away, and your writing.. Just. I don't get it, i can't even play chess with my 10 year old brother who just perfected the art of playing and typing which distracts me to the point of losing! So uhh, yeah, I just came back on to say that, er, that your coach is mean anyway.. haha I'm done now, I think... School sucks, but you can do it! I got all the faith in ya! x - Hannah

Hi there, I'm so late to reading this! Thank God for lunch breaks! (School sucks, I agree!) Lovely story as always, I'm so glad I found you! And I'm thankful you use writing as your outlit cause. You. Are. Fabulous! All the love ! x x

It seems everytime you post something its like 2 in the morning lol (I think there might be a time zone difference, maybe.. haha) this story was so cute 3 you deserve a Sweetness award (; so sad to hear school is sucky); I don't start until the 20th, the day of my birthday of all days, haha hope things get better for you! Thank you for posting this story, I genuinely enjoy reading your work, you have a knack for feels and a definite future in writing((: have a good day my dear! 3 - Hannah

That was so incredibly sweet! I sat here smiling like an idiot the whole time I was reading. I love opening and closing.