Great story, I hope the real ending is similar to this. I'd really like to see that.

What a good story! I loved it :
Bises
Blubule

will this be really happening in the manga? O: or similar to it in another version... anyway keep it up! I would love to read more!

Wow, that was pretty good. Tashigi's death was sad tho. But all in all I liked this story. Well done