Thank you, Jason, for being as dedicated as you can to this amazing story you've created. I enjoyed the Superman/Brainiac dynamic you wrote out for this short chapter. The immense worldbuilding of "Superman: The Ark of Krypton" is something that I'll never truly get enough of.

It's really nice seeing Superman and Kara with Jeremiah and Eliza Danvers here. They interact perfectly considering everything that's happening around them.

The part with Superman and his Earth parents is my favorite highlight of this chapter; it greatly solidifies the familial relationship between them.

Luthor and Lois are absolutely written well in this chapter. Great interactions from them both.

OKay, THIS is an interesting development.

Sorry about the blisters, but I'm glad you're healing. We missed you.

Glad you're feeling better and still writing this story. I hope Superman finds a way to restore his sight. It'll have to take loads of creativity on your part to make that happen.

Kara and Eliza are captured wonderfully here as characters. They help to keep "The Ark of Krypton"'s pace moving quite nicely.

I so love that this entire chapter is from Kara's point of view. Her character really shines here.

You're the best at writing the "Superman" universe. The way you depict Kara and Superman's viewpoints is very astonishing and well thought out.

This new chapter is seriously hot on action, yo! You wrote it out quite well with the differing viewpoints. Each fight scene is well choreographed and executed.

Maybe explain what the Ark is in the Summary. You might get more than one review.

No point in us reading yet another copy of the Superman origin story when we all know it.

Show us ahead of time that this will be something new.

Chapters just read as 'slow'. Also, another reporter Superman? Is this set in the 50s as well?

Again. Looks like another cut and paste. No motivation to read.

Things are definitely hot for Superman and Kara as they continue to fight for the things they care about. The writing on this chapter is as sharp as ever. :)

I truly appreciate the hard work you're putting into your "Superman" story. And this latest chapter certainly keeps things moving.

This chapter certainly keeps the story's momentum going. Granny Goodness, Superman, Lex Luthor, and Lois Lane have well-balanced character development that made me wanna tune in to more of the "Ark of Krypton" plot. I most definitely look forward to seeing it continue under your care.