So good! I wish there were more chapters so I know how it wraps up. I totally love this! Very good plot but so much left unanswered!

Please finish this story

Please update your story soon as I would like to know what happens next

So I know it's been forever and this is a long dead story by now but I love it! I hope you update again someday!

I love this! please keep going!

I just love this story please don't give it up! Your writing is so fluid and dare I say magical. Normally I don't read Eric/Tris stories though yours is wonderful thank you for posting it !

Soooooo good please don't stop it here!

Beautiful rambling brains (won't let me log in)
Really enjoyed this mature and different themed fanfic. I like stories that are not all focused on the divergent world. Well done!

OH, the kiss was perfect!
"Her eyes narrowed and jaded" perfect description! love this phrase!

Thanks for finally putting her story down. You set it up very well, the exchange of their eyes, her final break down, her having to tell the whole story. Can't wait to see the reaction from everyone the next day!

It's what it takes to bring the defenses to the top automatically.
ps
(You have that his alarm goes off at 3:30, but said Tris came home for lunch to check on them?)

I like the slow, but endearing pace of Eric and Tris.

Really liking this story. Different and most engaging. I love that you have Tris as a great no-holds barred therapist. Tells it like it is!

im game to read them if you are game to post them!

I was hoping for more Eric and Beth sibling relationship cause I barely see, cause to me it's just two strangers. And you're story is starting to be like every other story out there.