woah. Did not see that coming. To be honest this reminded me a lot of Buffy and Spike (I guess Angel being Soul in this case). It was good. It was *really* good, but the way that Maka and Kid interacted really reminded me of Buffy and Spike.

So good, I love the dynamic you brought to this story.

This is very good. Very deep story. This makes a great one-shot, but a part of me wants more. But then again, that's just me being greedy for more great reading! This is perfect. Kudos!

What maka and kid scariest twist scariest twist of all time (great fanfiction)

wHOA WHAT THE FUCK

Love the twist at the end! I thought it was Soul and Maka, not Kidd and Maka. Great story!